My daily routine
Hello, can you correct my notebook entry? Thanks!
Every morning I wake up around 7, and I start my day with a
fast quick shower. After that, I have breakfast
. Usually I eat a yogurt and I have a coffee.* Then I
dress up get dressed,
I brush my teeth, and
I brush my hair. **Then I'm ready to go to
the college. I take
my ^the bus and then I have a short walk to my department. Very often I have class both in the morning and in the afternoon
, so I have lunch at a bar near my dept
, with my friends. Otherwise, if I have lesson
s only in the morning, I come back home for lunch. When I have not class^^, I study or
I spend time in my hobbies (I love reading, running, watch
ing TV series, go
ing to
the theater). At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually
I watch a movie with my family and then
I go to bed.
*This is correct grammatically. However, you could also say. Usually I have a yogurt and coffee.
**You have started the sentence in the first person, so it is not necessary to continue to use the pronoun I in your list. That is implied. "Then I get dressed, brush my teeth, and brush my hair."
^The use of my implies possession. The sentence makes sense but sounds like you own the bus. Using 'the' makes more sense for the sentence...unless you do own the bus. : )
^^There are a couple ways to say this sentence. You can say:
1. When I don't have class,
2. When I have no classes,
I would usually use the first option rather than the second. The second is more formal.
Great Job! It's a great entry. : )