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My daily routine
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Every morning I wake up around 7, and I start my day with a fast shower. After that, I have breakfast, usually I eat a yogurt and I have a coffee. Then I dress up, I brush my theet, and I brush my hair. Then I'm ready to go to the college: I take my bus and then I have a short walk to my dept. Very often I have class both in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my dept, with my friends. Otherwise, if I have lesson only in the morning, I come back home for lunch. When I have not class, I study or I spend time in my hobbies (I love reading, running, watch tv series, go to theatre). At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually I watch a movie with my family and the I go to bed.
Every morning I wake up around 7 and start my day with a quick shower. After that, I have breakfast. I usually eat a yogurt and have coffee.Then, I get dressed, brush my teeth and brush my hair. After getting ready, I go to school on the bus and have a short walk to my department. I often have classes in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my department with my friends. On days that I only have a lesson in the morning, I go back home for lunch. When I do not have class, I study or spend time doing my hobbies. I love reading, running, watching TV series and going to the theater. At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually watch a movie with my family and then I go to bed.0 votedOctober 19, 20170One day in the public Library of my town
Yesterday I got up at eight o’clock a.m, I had a shower, and I had my breakfast ( a glass of orange juice, a cup of coffee with milk and two toasts with virgin olive oil).
--> You can say "eight o'clock" or "eight am", both are not necessary.
--> Two pieces of toast. Toast is what is called a "non-count" noun.
As everyday I went out for walk with my dog, my Golden Retriever, her name is Mia.
-->I think this would sound best saying "Like every other day, I went for a walk with my dog" or "took my dog for a walk".
We went for a promenade near a river. Mia likes this part of the park because there are ducks for chasing.
-->Not many people say promenade, the more common word when refering to a dog would be walk. "We went for a walk near a river".We are walking near one hour and half.
--> We were walking for nearly one and a half hours.
When we’ve finished our walk then we go back at home where I’ll have to clean to Mia.
--> There are various ways to say this, for example: When we finished our walk, we went back home where I cleaned Mia.
--> After finishing our walk, we went back home where I cleaned/bathed Mia.
As a general rule when I ’ve finished this routine I would begin to study English but yesterday I broke this routine because I decided to go to the public Library that is in the centre of the Town. If you want to go to the centre then you’d have to take a bus.
--> Centre is correct outside of the USA, in the USA it is spelled center.
I borrowed the book titled “Born to Run” written by Christofer Mcdougall, a marathon runner.
Some days ago I posted one paragraph about this book.
--> This is technically correct, but saying "A few days ago" sounds a little more natural.
I’ve begun to read it yesterday and I’m liking it. Now I’m reading it in Spanish but when I’ve finished it then I’ll try to read it in English.
--> I began to read it yesterday and I am liking it. Now I am reading it in Spanish, but when I finish it I will try to read it in English.
This is a book that a lot of runner more ultramarathon runners will have read it.
--> "This is a book that a lot of runners and ultramarathon runners will have read.0 votedOctober 19, 20171La Playa
Cuando yo era estaba una niña mi familia y yo irabamos la playa cada domingo. A la playa mi y mi hermana jugaba el fútbol y construíamos los castillos de arenas. Comíamos los sánguches a la playa. Me gustaba la playa mucha.
Cuando yo era una niña, mi familia y yo íbamos para la playa cada domingo. En la playa, mi hermana y yo jugábamos fútbol y constuíamos castillos de arena. Comíamos sánguiches [en Costa Rica decimos sandwiches o emparedados también] en la playa. Me gustaba mucho la playa.0 votedOctober 19, 20170
