Ah, lots of words to look up... thank you for saying the same thing in English first, that makes it a lot easier to read the Japanese. Please keep that up. よろしくお願いします. And I completely agree with you, at my current level I'm still struggling with the Japanese grammar and vocabulary, so I definitely wouldn't want to know stylistic alternatives yet :-) The way Italki handles formatting is strange: In comments to notebook entries it removes newlines, in comments to questions it keeps them. I don't like it, either. But I guess we have to live with it.

Ｐ．Ｓ． コメントは改行されないんですね！読みにくくなってすみません！

Hallo, dirkt and Kevin Vielen Danke für die Korrektur. Dass hilft mir sehr! I'm sure that there is not only one way to express something but some other way too, even if those are same meaning. I'd like to know them, well, I may be too beginner to think about it though. 訂正をありがとうございました。 とても助かります。 一つの事を表現するにも、その方法は一つだけでなく、 他にもいくつかの表現があると私は思っています。それを学びたいと 思っています。でもその事を考えるには初心者すぎるかもしれませんが。