2014年10月3日

今天我很累。因为昨天晚上我不会睡觉(没有睡好)。我的朋友告诉我很多的问题。以后(事情后）我不开心。早上三点在卧室的墙上我看（看到）一个（只）壁虎。我害怕。它去（爬到)我的床(边）。我不会—（不敢）睡觉。每个（隔）五分钟我看一次壁虎。

Could you help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Thanks.
“Process Quality” has finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition.
There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements in PQ through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she getting the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards: Definition of Project, Data Collection & Measurement, Facts and Data Analysis, Process/Product Improvement Plan, Implementation/Deployment Plan, Benefits/Results Attained and Controlling/Sustaining Benefits. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.
All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Valves Quality Improvement, Quality Improvement, and Capacity Improvement.
The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. At the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company.
All the judges and projects list as follows:

Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.

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2014年10月3日

今天我很累。因为昨天晚上我不会睡觉。

今天我很累，因为昨天晚上我没有睡觉。           

我的朋友告诉我很多的问题。以后我不开心。

我的朋友跟我讲了很多的事情，让我很不开心。

早上三点在卧室的墙上我看一个壁虎。我害怕。它去我的床。我不会睡觉。每个五分钟我看壁虎。

凌晨三点在卧室的墙上我看到一个壁虎，我很担心它爬到我的床上，所以我不敢睡觉。每过五分钟我就看下壁虎，哈哈。

2014年10月3日

今天我很累。因为昨天晚上沒有我不会睡得好觉 [睡 is the verb, 睡觉  is the noun, the sleep itself]。我的朋友告诉了我很多的问题。然以后我不开心了。早上三点在卧室的墙上我看着一隻个壁虎。我有些害怕会爬上。它去我的床来。我不能会睡觉。每个五分钟盯着我看壁虎。Poor thing!

2014年10月3日

今天我很累。因为昨天晚上我不会睡觉（没有睡好）。我的朋友告诉我很多的问题。以后我不开心（很多事情，让我非常不开心）。早上三点室的的（的时候）我看一个壁虎（看到一只壁虎）。我害怕。它去我的床（我很害怕它会到我的床上）。我不会睡觉。每个五分钟我看壁虎。（我睡不着觉，每隔五分钟我就看看壁虎）