評価だ 彼女は明るいし、優しいし、いつも人々を助けて、親切なこころの持ち主です。友達のできるのが好きなので、色々な友達がで来ました。勉強の時も、真面目に頭を働かせて繰り返し考えます。権威のある言葉に対しても、鵜呑みせず、批判的な検討を加えて思考します。と言っても、時々考えすぎたこともあるが、問題を複雑させるかも知れませんが。たまに、おっちょこちょい性格も現れました。幸い、大したトラブルを起こしたことまだありません。今後、もし頑張れば几帳面な人にもなれるでしょう。所詮に、彼女は知識を求める意欲が高いので、機会があったら、きっと必死に頑張るでしょう。

recommendation（推荐信2） 为了留学而写的推荐信，希望大家帮我修改。谢谢。（This is a recommendation letter for studying abroad please help me to alter it) I really appreciate that you see my recommendation. XXX has been a major of Japanese in XXX University from Sep.2011. She is an aspirant, optimistic student and she also always holds positive , professional study attitude and high spirit of exploration in study of specialized courses. Especially for new knowledge and new study environment, she possess excellent learning skills and the adaptability skills. What’s more, depending on the practice experience acquired in a variety of China-Japan communication activities, she masters more profound and unique views on specialized knowledge. What’s let me have more understanding about her is a China-Japan communication activity. This activity was entirely organized by students and XXX is the leader. She showed her outstanding organization skills, communication skills and the capability to face with emergency. For her, this precious experience also made her practice her specialized knowledge, improve her competence in major. There are other many activities like it so I believe that Haolai, Xia can perform very well on the way to pursuing her further study. In terms of learning and research skills, XXX has already possessed abundant specialized knowledge and technology and acquired corresponding professional certifications, which can help her quickly adapt new foreign environment and begin her new study. Thus, pursuing further study is a precious chance for her to be more excellent. In view of her major, undoubtedly, going to Japan for study is the best and appropriate option, which can give her a chance to show her talent. As the referrer, I heartily hope your university could accept the application ofXXX. I wish that she could diligently study, realize her dream in Japan and make great contribution to her country and the culture exchanges in the world. Thank for you again and express sincere appreciation to you.

recommendation(推荐信1.） 为了留学而写的推荐信，希望大家帮我修改。谢谢。（This is a recommendation letter for studying abroad please help me to alter it) I really appreciate that you see my letter while you have so much to do. XXX has. been major in Japanese in XXX University from Sep.2011. During these years, she has studied diligently and aspirantly. Additionally, she also has positive exploration sprit and possesses original thoughts. I notice that she often carries out heated discussion about specialized knowledge with her teachers and classmates . In the discussion, she always insists on truth and put forward her transcend opinions without yielding to authorities. She is outgoing , diligent and responsible to her knowledge. With a serious attitude, she always inquires and confirm the details neglected in the classes and actively shares her thoughts with others. In particular, she isn’t restricted by the “standard answer” and instead puts forward her own deliberate thoughts. What is the most impressive thing about her is that one day we talked about “the news reported on the 7th channel”. All of other students thought that it should be translated to “the news reported on the 7th channel” but she bravely put forward a counterargument that it can be translated to “the fixed program on seven o’ clock in the evening. This thing can clearly reflected her exploration spirit and learning skills Now she has decided to go further study in Japan to improve her learning skills and research skills. If she can acquire the chance, I believe that she can dedicate herself to her study to a large extent and devote herself to the culture exchanges in the future.