We'll Need another Planet!
I just read the news today, And there's an article which states we are causing devastating damage to our planet. That's nothing new, but according to what scientists say, we would need another planet, or maybe two, if we continue consuming as much as we are now. And despite of the fact that there are greater possibilities of the existance of other planets capable of life bearing, I don't think we'll get to see that soon!
They also point out that if we don't start changing our ways now, we'll be out of resourses by the year 2030. That means, we won't be able to support ourselves, no food, no electricity, no water, NO LIFE indeed!
So, Why don't we start pondering that and really DO something about it!
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We'll Need another Planet!
I just read the news today, And there's an article which states we are causing devastating damage to our planet. That's nothing new, but according to what scientists say, we would need another planet, or maybe two, if we continue consuming as much as we are now. And despite of the fact that there are greater possibilities of the existance of other planets capable of life bearing ("supporting life" would be better, here), I don't think we'll get to see that soon!They also point out that if we don't start changing our ways now, we'll be out of resources by the year 2030. That means, we won't be able to support ourselves, no food, no electricity, no water, NO LIFE indeed!
So, Why don't we start pondering that and really DO something about it!
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Your English is brilliant :)
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Excellent. Great topic, well written. Oddly, one would say "life bearing planet" to describe such a planet or "planet capable of bearing life" to say what type of planet it is. I admit that it is strange that the word order would change for that difference (and I am not an English professor, so I do not know why that is) but that is how it is said. Other than that your writing was very fluent and I would think that you were a native English speaker!
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I've already thought of this and I've started to build a ship that will carry us all to another planet. Please send me money so I can finish it.
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We'll Need another Planet!
I just read an article in the news today[Consider saying it this like this: Although there may well be life on other planets, it is unlikely we will see it anytime soon.]
They also point out that if we don't start changing our ways now, we'll be out of resources by the year 2030. That means, we won't be able to support ourselves, no food, no electricity, no water, NO LIFE indeed!
So, Why don't we start pondering that and really DO something about it!
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Hola Czar. Well done, and an important topic.
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