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For the first time The time I am spending in the United Kingdom is full of first times. The first time I tried some dish, my first full English, my first beans on toast. It is my first time out of America. But nothing is like the first time I tried to swim. Yes, I have missed many simple things during my life. Last weekend I was in Wales and I had the opportunity to try. I was not considering swimming so I even had swimming cloths. It was something had been out of my life as far as this weekend. Initially I was very afraid for I am not very young, but I had my friends to help me. For the a first time I think I did well, I’ll practice more and maybe this sport will became part of my life for now on. I had to give up on many usual things when I was younger. I do not regret. Maybe it is that I have my own time, and it is now. From all the first times I am having in this country and for many others that are to come, I am sure that nothing will be as present in my life as the first time I felt the power of gravity while leaving the swimming pool for the first time. Someone once said life is a set of simple things, so it is life.

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For the first time

The time (that) I am spending in the United Kingdom is full of first times. (full of firsts) 
The first time I tried some (a certain dish) dish, my first full English, my first beans on toast.
It is my first time out of America.
But nothing is like the first time I tried to swim. Yes, I have missed many simple things during my life. (in my life up to now)
Last weekend I was in Wales and I had the opportunity to try.
I was not considering swimming so I didn't even have any swimming clothes. (a swimming costume) It was something had been out of missing from my life as far as up to this weekend.
Initially I was very afraid for I am not very young, but I had my friends to help me.
For the a first time I think I did well; I’ll practice more and maybe this sport (passtime) will became part of my life for from now on.
I had to give up on many usual (normal) things when I was younger. I do not regret. (I have no regrets) Maybe it is that I have my own time, and it is now. (Maybe the time has come for me)
From Among all the first times (firsts) I am having in this country and for many others that are to come, I am sure that nothing will be as present (telling / vivid) in my life (memory) as the first time I felt the power (force) of gravity while (when) leaving the swimming pool for the first time.
Someone once said 'life is a set of simple things', so it is life.

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Congratulations, Alexandre! Que bela experiência, a que você está vivenciando agora. Sempre é tempo de crescer, de aprender coisas novas ou simples na vida. É o nosso "mundo interno criança" que nos faz vibrar com pequeninas realizações! sucesso.
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Thank you guys! From now on I think I'll try more "new things". There is a kid inside me.. who will never change...
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A very nice piece of writing. Congratulations! There is a song "Turn, Turn, Turn!" which, in its various versions, includes the line "To everything, there's a season!" and what you transmit is a similar idea, regardless your age, there's a chance for doing everything, and everytime you start doing something new, you've got that thrill, as if you were a child.
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Very interesting, Alexandre. One day you should try to skate (on ice). It is cool. It is important not to get descouraged by potential failures. :)

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