9/11/12

今天是我国 ”爱国日，“ 因为今天是九月十一日， 十一年前俺国被攻击，有无数人去世。9/11时候我十一岁，当天我逃学，恐怖攻击时候我在上床睡觉，我母亲很惊恐，让我睡醒，陪着她看新闻。我家乡在旧金山附近，我这儿离NYC很远；NYC在美国东边，我在西边 （提醒你们努力学美国地理！），所以我就没事，可是我还感觉很雷人。 我们的反抗战争用了很长时间， Bush和Obama一样不愿意停止这件战争； 这件事情是我现代的最后悔的事情。战争浪费无数的青春的生活，又搞垮（RUIN？）我国经济。 我认为我们应该用我们的军人保护我国。 我其他都不说；我意见可以冒犯人，哈哈。

反正，我今天心情不错。 玩柔软体操，所以我心，骨头，血，感觉很健康

Notes: Your Chinese is very outstanding! To make it perfect, some words and phrases should be corrected.

俺国 should be 我国，俺国 is too informal, ususally used in oral Madarin.

惊恐 should be 震惊，惊恐 is similar to 震惊，but in this scenario, 震惊 is more applicable. 震惊 means shocked if something(usually bad news) unexpected happens. 惊恐 is more like scared when terrible things happen.

反抗战争 should be 反恐战争，means anti-terrism

军人 should be 军队， 军人 means a soldier, while 军队 means an army. A country is suppose to be protected by an army instead of a soldier.

Hope it helps.

French teacher wanna(wants to) learn chinese

I am learning Chinese (Mandarin), because I want to work in China. I also wanna(want to) make new friends from Asia.
My native language is French, and I grew up in France.
I am fun(humorous) and easy going(easy-going) personn(person). Sociable, trustful(trustworthy) and honest.

Notes: Hi Ledge, your English is good, I understand you very well, but still you'd better pay attention to the word and spelling next time. Good luck!

我介绍一下(自己)

我学习中国中文两年了。
可是自己学习的。
(可是)我觉得我的中文水平最近没有进步。

所以我在这里，再多学习一点。
请大家帮我学习。

My English Diary: Day Twenty-Six

I have a comrade(colleague/friend) called Pepote. He is a very kind boy, and I'm sure that he will be a good professional in the future.
He is working(had been working) with us since two years ago, and he is yet getting used to remain awake all night,(he gets used to stay up all night) because we always work from 22 pm to 06 am.
He has black hair, white skin and blue eyes. He is tall and skinny. In the past he was a tennis trainer, teaching children the way to play like Rafa Nadal, the spanish professional tennis player.
At the moment he prefer(prefers) to play Paddel, even he won(wins) this year the company's championship.

Friday is coming finally!

I love Friday, because it reminds me that a weekend is approaching. After five tedious working days, I feel exhausted and wish to have a sound sleep on weekends. There are a lot of things I want to do, such as watching movies, playing computer games and eating out. However, every weekend passes so quickly that I never truely enjoy it. When I wake up, It's Monday again. What should I do? Give myself more holidays or get used to it? I realize that the best way is trying to love my daily work, enjoy helping people make financial plan. In addition, be patient and kind to my clients. In that way, I will be happy from Monday to Friday, and happier on weekend!