asking about some phrases and vocab in apragraph to make it more acadamic. I wrote a paper I want to make sure that what I wrote as its conclusion makes sense due to the fact that I have tried to use some vocab and phrases that I have never used before. Here is the paragraph, "...As stated above, it can be said that various factors propagate unbalanced datasets, which impairs classification performance. however implementing methods such as pseudo-DE and GDC augment the performance of classification. Hence further investigation on data reproduction may stimulate the development of new techniques." Thanks in advance p.s. any suggestion which can make my text to be more academic would be welcome.

The Birth It felt like I was in the North Pole, Frozen, Dead frozen! Like I was inside an icicle, Trapped As if I were part of it, I believed I was. Everything was cold, dead cold Have you ever seen the world from inside of an icicle? I have. You would ask yourself every time you open your eyes, “who would want to pass over this frozen land ever?” “No ONE”, it’s what your heart and your mind would shout at you over and over to make you stop asking such foolish question and stop torturing them by lightening the glimmer of hope in them. I was stuck there and was about to close my icy eyes forever Then you came Out of the nowhere, “Who would like to see icicles”, I wondered and I thought I am losing my mind But then you started to stare at an icicle God, you looked real, not an illusion You started to stare at an icicle and guess which one you chose to stare at? Yes, the one I was stuck in You looked at it as if you could see me there, like you wanted to melt it till you release me. I was overwhelmed, confused You put your hand around it, and started to blow it you wanted to melt it by your breath, “how silly”, I thought But you stayed there, Long For long, Long time And kept blowing your breath Until I felt the warmth My heart started to beat My blood started to flow I felt warm inside too Now I was able to melt the ice too We both kept trying Until I merged out I was weak But free In your hands

Grandma’s Chest! Grandma used to put her precious stuff in a chest and hide it somewhere, somewhere no one else was aware of. I grew up this way. I mean as a child I assumed that this is what everyone else does and that precious things should be hidden, so I did the same! For me, some “feelings “ were so precious, so I hid them deep, deep inside me, and didn’t let anyone knows about them. Perhaps I was so frightened to lose them! Some were hidden so deep for so long, that I myself had forgotten about them! Sometimes when I am walking on the street unaware of things that I have hidden somewhere, I face tiny little things, like a familiar smile on a stranger’s face or a flying balloon of cute little kid, or a deep wrinkle on that old woman’s face on the street corner, or just a box of chocolates. Then I feel these tiny little things are reminding me of some of those things that have hidden somewhere and that’s when I realize how much I missed them in my life!