another makeshift love poem
In Thrall
I feel you in
Every drop of sweat
Dripping from my body
this salty
this moist love
my only remedy
every time we touch
I rejuvenate
I'm a newborn baby
fresh
raw
and ready
for new woes
new sarrows
for mind slavery
again and fain
my death
shall be by your hands
kill me softly
with your lust
your passion, your desire
until I leave you out
out of my memory
Seda
16.06.2015
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Another makeshift love poem.
In Thrall (enthral)
I feel you in
Every drop of sweat
Dripping from my body
this salty
this moist love
my only remedy
every time we touch
I rejuvenate
I'm a newborn baby
fresh
raw
and ready
for new woes
new sorrows
for mind slavery
again and feign
my death
shall be by your hands
kill me softly
with your lust
your passion, your desire
until I leave you out
out of my memory
Seda
16.06.2015
Seda, it's not possible to correct grammar in a poem, but if you are going to start each line with a capital letter, maybe you should continue?
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For God is poetry and She shall take what she wants. Amen.
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Thank you! :*
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i liked this :)))
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sahane!
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