I'm studying English because I like this language, and I wish to learn much!

Hello, my name is Mariela. I am learning english because I like it, but I'm still in the basic level. I'd like to learn more, I'd like to learn much that is why I signed up for this site. Also, I desire want to help others learn my native language, is Spanish, and make friends.

I replaced desire with want because there's a slight variance in meaning. It read slightly awkward

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to meet people from other countries and help me in my proffesion.
My language is Spanish and I'm from Venezuela. I love art in all its forms. I like meeting interesting and extraordinary people. and out of the ordinary.

I'm on a train

I'm writting this while I'm on a train from San Antonio de Padua to Buenos Aires city to check if my English has become more fluent since my trip. Later, when I get home, I'm going to post it on Italki.

It's raining. It's raining very, very badly. This train got has some differences with from those the ones I took when I was in Europe. Let me tell you all a little about them. First of all, there's no glass in some windows, so it's cold here. Sometimes people throw rocks at the train to break its windows. I don't know why they do that, but they do. Also, some cars got have roof leaks, so maybe you're might be sitting and it water begins to leak water all over your head. but To be fair, though, not all the trains are like this one. This is one of the old ones and they're being replaced. The new ones got have AC and TVs. So now you're asking yourself, "couldn't he have waited for one of those?" No, I couldn't because I'm late for my appointment with my dentist dentist appointment. I think I have to use get brackets, but I'm not sure yet. Here, in Argentina, trains doesn't arrive on time, or at least not at the time they were supposed to; so you just go to the train station and wait for one to come. The girl sitting next to me is watching me while I'm writting this and is now smiling because she realizes I'm writting about her. It seems she knows english, too. Also, there are vendors that walk along the corridor left between seatings, talking loudly. Thanks God I got have my music on, so I can't hear nothing anything but Lagwagon. Selling things over on the train is forbidden; at least it's supposed to be forbidden. The police let them do it anyway. After all, it is an honest job. Well, I'm almost there, so I'll finish this right now.

Thanks for reading!

HELP ME

I want to study English. Help me.

HELP ME

I want to study english. Help me.

Presentation

Hi, my name is Carlos. I'm writing this presentation because I want that someone to help me with the grammar, and especially, where I have to put commas. So, I'm 21 years old and my hobbies are playing soccer, listening to music, and playing on my laptop. I'm studying civil engineering and I would like to improve my English to have more possibilities to study or work abroad. I really appreciate anyone who can help me correcting this message. Thank you.

Bye

Carlos, the comma that I highlighted in blue after "listening to music" is not necessary, but I included the correction because you mentioned your interest in learning correct comma usage. That type of comma usage is known as the Oxford Comma. You can do more research or message me for a more in-depth explaination if you wish.