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I'm on a train I'm writting this while I'm on a train from San Antonio de Padua to Buenos Aires city to check if my English has become more fluent since my trip, later, when I get home I'm going to post it on Italki. It's raining, it's raining very very bad, and this train got some differences with those ones I took when I was in Europe, let me tell you all a little about them. First of all, there's no glass in some windows, so it's cold here, sometimes people throw rocks at the train to broke its windows, I don't know why they do that, but it happens, also some cars got roof leaks, so maybe you're sitted and it begins to leak water all over your head, but to be fair, not all the trains are like this one, this is one of the old ones and they're being replaced, they new ones got AC and TV, so now you're asking yourself "Couldn't he wait one of those?" No, I couldn't, I'm late for my appointment with my dentist, I think I have to use brackets, but not sure yet. Here in Argentina trains doesn't arrive on time, at least not at the time they were supposed to do it, so you just go to the train station and wait for one to come. The girl sitting next to me watches me while I'm writting this and now smiles because she realizes I'm writting about her, it seems she knows english too, also there are sellers, they walk along the corridor left between seatings, talking loud, thanks God I got my music on, so I can't hear nothing but Lagwagon, selling things over the train is forbidden, al least it's supossed to be forbidden, but the police let them do it, after all is an honest job, well I'm almost there so I'll finish this right now. Thanks for reading!

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I'm on a train

I'm writting this while I'm on a train from San Antonio de Padua to Buenos Aires city to check if my English has become more fluent since my trip. Later, when I get home, I'm going to post it on Italki.

It's raining. It's raining very, very badly. This train got has some differences with from those the ones I took when I was in Europe. Let me tell you all a little about them. First of all, there's no glass in some windows, so it's cold here. Sometimes people throw rocks at the train to break its windows. I don't know why they do that, but they do. Also, some cars got have roof leaks, so maybe you're might be sitting and it water begins to leak water all over your head. but To be fair, though, not all the trains are like this one. This is one of the old ones and they're being replaced. The new ones got have AC and TVs. So now you're asking yourself, "couldn't he have waited for one of those?" No, I couldn't because I'm late for my appointment with my dentist dentist appointment. I think I have to use get brackets, but I'm not sure yet. Here, in Argentina, trains doesn't arrive on time, or at least not at the time they were supposed to; so you just go to the train station and wait for one to come. The girl sitting next to me is watching me while I'm writting this and is now smiling because she realizes I'm writting about her. It seems she knows english, too. Also, there are vendors that walk along the corridor left between seatings, talking loudly. Thanks God I got have my music on, so I can't hear nothing anything but Lagwagon. Selling things over on the train is forbidden; at least it's supposed to be forbidden. The police let them do it anyway. After all, it is an honest job. Well, I'm almost there, so I'll finish this right now.

Thanks for reading!

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I'm on a train

I'm writing this while I'm on a train from San Antonio de Padua to Buenos Aires city to check if my English has become more fluent since my trip. Later, when I get home I'm going to post it on Italki.

It's raining, it's raining very very bad(informal) (I'd say heavily/hard talking about rain), and this train HAS (got)(though some people do say just 'got', but it's very informal) some differences with those ones (this is a bit clumsy - I think, this train is different TO/FROM/THAN... sounds way better)  I took when I was in Europe. Let me tell you all a little about them. First of all, there's no glass in some windows, so it's cold here - sometimes people throw rocks at A (any) train to brEAk its windows. I don't know why they do that, but it happens. Some cars HAVE also got (or some cars also have) roof leaks, so while you're sitting (you're seated-more formally) water might/could/may drip/ leak all over your head, but to be fair, not all (the) trains are like this one. This is an old one and they're being replaced(or this is an old, which are...). The new ones HAVE (got) (or are equipped with/fit with) AC and TV. So now you're asking yourself "Couldn't he have waited for one of those?"(not talking about ability in the past but about possibility, so 'have' is essential) No, I couldn't, I'm running late (in progress) for my appointment with my dentist. I think I might/could/may have to use WEAR brackets (braces), but not sure yet. Here in Argentina trains don't (only 'don't' in negatives agees with plurals)arrive on time, at least not at the time they were (are) supposed to( do it), so you just go to the train station and wait for one to come. The girl sitting next to me IS watchING me(she's doing it right now) while I'm writing this and now is smiling because she realizes I'm writing about her. It seems she knows English too.There are also some vendors walkING along the aisle between the (in this car)seats, talking loudLY. Thanks God I HAVE (got) my music on, so I can't hear anything(double negation is rare in English) but Lagwagon. Selling things on a train is forbidden, al least it's supossed to be SO (to avoid repetition); but the police let them do it, after all, it is an honest jo. Well, I'm almost there, so I'll finish this right now.

Thanks for reading!

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