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Hello Eva! I am an English teacher/tutor and have been doing it for the past 9 years. As follows, you will see below the corrections I made to your text:
On December 20, 2013, a new game came out named Play Beat the Boss 3. This game is known as the producer of games from the Game Hive Corporation. It is an arcade game where it counts the number of reflexes, speed, and fitness. The whole point of this game is to kill the boss. Are you angry at your boss? Does it annoy you? In this game you can dig it. There is truly nothing easier than if you just have access to download the game on your cell phone. The choices of weapons are greanades and various other killing weapons to where you can earn more powerful items in this game "Beat the Boss 3."
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0 votedDecember 30, 20130Hello! My name is Joy and I am more than willing to teach you the English language. I have been teaching/tutoring for the past 9 years. I conduct the lessons here on Italki.com or right on Skype. My hourly rate is $15.00 per hour and Skype Id is joy.e.chapman. If you have any interest, then please let me know.
0 votedDecember 30, 20130Forbidden Love
It was a rainy and thundery day. Mary sat by the bay window, writing a letter. She wrote uncommonly slow as she needed to consider every single word she used. By the afternoon, she had finished; after having to sit before her desk for three hours. Afterwards, she placed the letter into a pink envelope.
"Mary, where are you?" she asked. "Your Grace, I am here. How may I help you?" replied Mary, who is the most trusted servant. "Please prepare my cab. I need to be at Jonelli Villa by two," answered Mary. She handed the letter to her and says, "If I never come back, please send this to the Parliament." The servant responds, "Yes, ma'am."
As forty minutes passed, Mary arrived at Jonelli Villa at half past one. A servitor whom she knew came and escorted her into the stately villa. "Welcome, Your Grace, please follow me this way," said the servitor bowing deeply. "No ceremony, David, no ceremony!" shouted Mary. "Where is the duke?" "He is in the bedchamber, Your Grace." "Bring me to him at once." Hastily the servitor ushered her up the stairs and into the chamber. "Oh, John. Thank you David. Leave us alone!" "I will be leaving, Your Grace."
There in the bed was a many lying feebly. He looked cadaverous. However, from the features of his countenance, one still could tell that he was a handsome nobleman. "John, I am here. Can you hear me?" she whispered into his left ear. He didn't give a response. Obviously, he was near the end at such a tender young age. "Almighty God! Have mercy on me," she cried. "Mary," he uttered weakly. "John, my love are you all right?" as she began to sob uncontrollably. She pulled out a pink handkerchief, wiping away her tears. "Mary, listen to me. Do not be sad. Be brave. I shall die soon and it seems the Lord likes me very much. It will be my time soon to go and be with him," he panted. "The Lord will always watch over you and so will I. When you marry him, the marriage will certainly consolidate your position. I want you to be very safe. I will no longer be in your way." "Never! If you go to be with the Lord, then bring me along. I cannot live without you," her cries intensified. "No! No! You must not keep that idea in your mind, not even for a single second," he gently chided her. "Your duty." "Hush John. John? No! Noooooo!" she screamed. The servitor dashed into the room, speechless upon seeing his master's demise. She had lost the man she loved the most.
This is the excerpt from one of his love letters to her:
"...As you know, our marriage will never be possible. However, our love will be eternal. If you marry one day, then I will not be sad. I believe our hearts will always be together. Mary, do not let your heart rule your head. I shall never be an obstacle in your life."
0 votedAugust 17, 20121My Writing- A Reference Letter
I had to write a reference letter for one of my friends' who had applied for a job teaching English abroad. This is what I wrote and writing the letter must be two-hundred twenty (220) to two-hundred fifty (250) words.
To Whom It May Concern,
I have had the priviledge of knowing Jenifer Lopez for about eleven (11) years since high school and believe it is an honor to write on behalf of her. Jenifer is a caring person and has a clear-sighted type of character. Furthermore, she definitely has a high level of patience for things and with people, bubbly personality where she is lively and has an energetic manner, and so this is how come I believe this makes her a perfect choice to perform and a teacher. She is dependable with a great sense of responsibility and seems to be a favorite English teacher in our secondary school. She runs 9 classes a week and so I believe she is the type of person who can take control of difficult situations. Finally, I believe that she is able to cope with any problems or difficulties she faces as a teacher.
In addition to the above qualities and great personality, Jenifer is a fluent English speaker and has the talent of writing English poems. She received an international literature aware in 2011. Also, she has translated a number of English novels to Persian and has gained the title of "Country's Best Translator" twice in recent years.Jenifer Lopez ia not only a great English teacher, but I have found she is very creative, imaginative person, and always provides her students with many different games and activities that is in the appropriate age ranges and levels. She is an enthusiastic person whose full of great ideas. The key to keeping her students in her English classes are the different activities.
I highly recommend Jenifer as a professional English teacher. Please feel free to contact me for any further information regarding Jenifer Lopez.
Sincerely,
Mariah
English Teacher at Watermelon Secondary School
0 votedAugust 15, 20120- The verb affect means "to influence." The verb effect means "to bring about." Effect is more frequently employed as a noun to mean "the result". Some examples of sentences are as follows: 1. The new law may affect our expansion program. 2. We are hoping to effect a few minor changes. 3. They could not foretell what the effect would be. Here are the correct way for this article: "Some of the most common causes for poor eyesight is the result of our lifestyle both work and play. Computers and televisions play a critical role in how it effects our vision and eyesight." What is the meaning of "to effect of our eyesight and vision"? Additional Details: The article was compiled. I googled and found the original: Some of the most common causes for poor eyesight is a result of our lifestyle both work and play. Computers and televisions have played a critical role in the effects of our eyesight and vision. http://ezinearticles.com/?Eye-Exercises-to-Improve-Vision---Restore-20-20-Vision-Naturally&id=39010270 votedAugust 14, 20121
- When using the word "of" it is kind of vague depending upon how your sentence is phrased. As for the word "to" it is more considered that your notebook is currently being corrected for corrections. The correct way to phrase this sentence is as follows: Your corrections to my notebook entry.0 votedAugust 14, 20120
- Would is the past tense form of will. It is a modal auxiliary verb. After would, infinitives are used without to. I would like some advice. (NOT I would to like some advice.) She said that she would come. (NOT She said that she would to come.) Questions and negatives are made without do. Would you like to come with me? (NOT Do you would like to come with me?) He wouldn’t come. (NOT He don’t would come.) Note that the contracted form of would not is wouldn’t. Would and Will Would acts as the past tense form of will in reported speech. In other cases, would is a more polite form of will. Direct speech: She said, ‘I will come.’ Indirect speech: She said that she would come. Would is used in requests and offers. Note that would is more polite than will. Would you move a bit? (More polite than ‘Will you move a bit?’) Would you mind opening the window? (More polite than ‘Will you mind opening the window?) Would can be used to talk about past habits. The old man would sit in a corner and talk to himself for hours. She would always bring us nice little gifts. Would and used to Both would and used to can be used to talk about past habits or repeated actions. But note that only used to can refer to past states. He used to be a chain smoker. (NOT He would be a chain smoker.) The above sentence means that he is not a chain smoker at the moment, but he used to smoke a lot at some point in the past. Would is also common in sentences referring to unreal or uncertain situations. I would tell you if I knew her name. He would have helped you if you had asked him.0 votedAugust 14, 20120
- You use the following words: At for a POINT, In for an ENCLOSED SPACE, and On for a SURFACE. Please look at the following examples to use word AT: 1. At the corner 2. At the bus stop 3. At the top of the page 4. At the door 5. At the end of the road 6. At the entrance 7. At the crossroads 8. At the front desk 9. At home 10. At work 11. At school 12. At university 13. At the top 14. At the bottom 15. At reception 16. At the side Please look at the following examples to use word ON: 1. On the wall 2. On the ceiling 3. On the door 4. On the cover 5. On the floor 6. On the carpet 7. On the menu 8. On a page 9. On a bus 10. On a train 11. On a plane 12. On a ship 13. On a bicycle or motorbike 14. On a horse or elephant 15. On the radio 16. On a television 17. On the left or on the right 18. On the way Please look at the following examples to use word IN: 1. In the garden 2. In London 3. In France 4. In a box 5. In my pocket 6. In my wallet 7. In a building 8. in a car 9. In a taxi 10. In a helicopter 11. In a boat 12. In a lift 13. In an elevator 14, In the newspaper 15. In the sky 16. In a row 17. In Oxford Street Look at these examples: •Jane is waiting for you at the bus stop. •The shop is at the end of the street. •My plane stopped at Dubai and Hanoi and arrived in Bangkok two hours late. •When will you arrive at the office? •Do you work in an office? •I have a meeting in New York. •Do you live in Japan? •Jupiter is in the Solar System. •The author's name is on the cover of the book. •There are no prices on this menu. •You are standing on my foot. •There was a "no smoking" sign on the wall. •I live on the 7th floor at 21 Oxford Street in London.0 votedAugust 14, 20120
- Concealed weapons are weapons, especially handguns, which are kept hidden on one's person, or under one's control. Carrying a concealed weapon is illegal in most states unless the party with the weapon is a law enforcement officer or has a permit to carry a concealed weapon. Some states allow citizens to carry a concealed weapon, while allowing places open to the public to post a notice banning concealed weapons on the premises. Requirements for permits to carry a concealed weapon vary by state, but they usually require a minimum age, completion of a safety course, and prohibit felons or those found mentally unstable or guilty of certain crimes to obtain a permit, among other requirements. A number of states allow law-abiding citizens to carry concealed weapons after obtaining the proper permits. These are often referred to as "concealed carry" laws. For example, one state allows a concealed carry permit to be issued to anyone who is at least 21 years old, has lived in the state at least 45 days, the county or adjacent county for 30 days, completes a 12-hour firearms training course, and passes criminal and mental-health background checks. As of this writing, only six U.S. states do not have a concealed carry law. Laws vary by state, so local laws should be consulted for requirements in your area. The following is a state law defining a concealed weapon: 62.1-04-01. Definition of concealed. A firearm or dangerous weapon is concealed if it is carried in such a manner as to not be discernible by the ordinary observation of a passerby. There is no requirement that there be absolute invisibility of the firearm or dangerous weapon, merely that it not be ordinarily discernible. A firearm or dangerous weapon is considered concealed if it is not secured, and is worn under clothing or carried in a bundle that is held or carried by the individual, or transported in a vehicle under the individual's control or direction and available to the individual, including beneath0 votedAugust 14, 20120
- It is stated that English language learners should read between 10 to 5 pages per day. If you don't understand the words, then look them up in the dictionary, thesaurus, or even online to get an idea of what the true meaning of the words really are. It is quite difficult to get the hang of knowing a book, article, novel, short story, and essay on the first time of being read. You should read what you feel the most comfortable way for you really is. My reading style is to start out with something short and then continue if interested in reading a book, novel, short story, literature, or poems.0 votedAugust 14, 20120
