Multitasking

I am a journalist from the newspaper under the name of Today's News.

Today we have on a visit an interview today with dear Lisa Kent, a prominent director of the Brain, Cognition, and Action laboratory at the University of ______(Name the university or it won't make sense). In our telecast we will discuss and speak about multitasking. Many people try to carry out two or more tasks at the same time but is it a problematic part of our society or not? Many people can be reading this blog while cooking dinner, or watching the news on TV. The person Many people can do all many things at once. What do you think?

Our readers say that they don't have time and they feel the constantly exhausted . If people want to improve the quality of work and lower stress levels at that rate, will multitasking work or not? How can our audience increase overall performance? What would you advise for our audience?

Thanks for such detailed answers. So today we met the expert Lisa Kent, a prominent director of the Brain, Cognition, and Action laboratory at the University of _______. Above all We spoke about the interesting and important subject of multitasking. Our readers received answers to their questions, and now we hope that their lives will become not such harry as earlier less hurried.

A bit of new folk music

Today I would like to talk about folk music. Well, I mean the "new" folk music. For example, Mumford and Sons, Laura Marling, Mark Knopfler, Johny Flynn etc. I hope you understand that what I mean.

In my opinion, folk music it is one of the best kind genres (sounds better) of music out there. It's very naturally and truthfully. I really love that's type of music. It's not like a the typical, "fashionable" type of music. I think it's important in that sense. The sounds of banjos makes me feel divinely, the sound of the acoustic guitar sounds is also amazing. The sounds of the accordion with and the violin too... Oh, it's wonderful. What do you think about of it?
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A very good piece of writing, quite clearly communicated, although some of the adjectives don't quite fit in with the noucs that you are describing. With those I have highlighted them blue.

With fashionable, another word that might suit a bit better (especially for music) would be "mainstream".

Brands

What is a brand? A brand is a name, which affects the behavior of customers. Brand - it’s more than just advertising or marketing. That's All that comes to mind is a person on the product when he sees or hears his name logo. ??? I don't understand what you're trying to say...

People who buy branded products believe that it the brand is a guarantee of the quality and that the product is therefore reliable. Another reason, why people buy branded products, is to attract a bit of attention if they by buying something stylish, and which is why branded products are usually stylish and have a good design. Most people buy brands because they want to impress other people. They want to show that they have style and good taste.
AnOther people don’t like brands. They don’t want to give a free advertising to a company. They probably hate all the advertising hype around brands. and they normally get annoyed when they see the same thing on other people. If they buy a suit from a famous brand, they can see five people with the same suit that month. Another thing is are whether or not they are buying the genuine product or an illegal copy.? Basically, people want value for money. They don’t want to pay inflated prices for a name, a fancy logo and packaging.

Thanks for your modification

Thanks for your modification
I published my first article on italki yesterday, and after waking up this morning, I saw a modified modification by Ms. Rimareve, then I then knew my article there are had many mistakes, in particular, there are were many problems in terms of grammar.
Learning a language is difficult, but I am very happy, and I thank her for the modification., and I'm looking forward to you to modifying my article in the future, and I thank you for reading of this article.
I would like to say, that I've just enjoyed a delicious meal, and then wrote this article, it's which has made me really happy, I hope you are too. girls and boys...
Best Wishes,
Samson

This article is so cute!^^

Impact of Family Wealth On Children's Development -- Revision

Question:

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents.

To what extents do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

ANSWER:

Children from poor families are faced with a wide range of undeniable challenges. For this reason, they usually cannot prepare themselves for their adult lives as well as their counterparts from wealthy families do.

The most notable disadvantages of for children from poor families, is their inadequate education opportunities. In these modern times, diligence and perseverance alone are not enough for acquiring knowledge. In order to keep up with the current pace of the changes, they need to have access to the most up-to-date information. Unfortunately, their families with financial challenges cannot support them adequately in this regard. For example, their parents cannot necessarily afford their textbooks, tuition and Internet access broadband. In their adulthood, an inferior education would could be a problem for them, in terms of dealling to deal with a variety of complex challenges.

In addition, children from poorer families often do not have strong social connections. Children from wealthy families can make friends with peers of similar backgrounds from an early age. These friends can help them to deal with various challenges in adult life. However, this is not the case for children from poorer families. They may also have many friends, but their friends tend to be less helpful under these circumstances.

Some people believe children from poor families have certain advantages over their wealthier counterparts. They tend to illustrate their viewpoint by referring to stories of a few accomplished celebrities who happen to have been raised in poor families. But most of these successful individuals either have exceptional innate talents, or are particularly motivated. Therefore, they are only rare cases.

In conclusion, children from poor families are in an unfavourable position in addressing their adulthood difficulties due to their insufficient education opportunities and limited social circles.

Extremely well written. Most of my corrections were more suggestions rather than corrections, because in English you have to be quite clear in you point, unlike most Asian languages, where many people like to infer from whatever they're saying/writing. Anyways, well done!!!