Hey , I'm Esmail and I'd like to join. Skype: smoalesh

الإسلام في الصين

السلام عليكم,يا أصدقائي, رمضان كريم

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أعرف أننا الآن في شهر رمضان. فأريد أن أن أكتب لكم مقالة عن الإسلام في الصين.أتمني أن تحبو مقالتي.
أولاً أود أن أتحدث عن ثقافات الشعب الصيني , الشعوب الصينية تتكون من ٥٦ قوميات ( ثقافات أو قبائل ) , ومن بين هذه القوميات الستة والخمسين يوجد عشر قوميات تعتنق الإسلام , لكن٩٢ % من الشعب الصيني ينتمي لقومية الهان ,و قليل منهم مسلمون.كثير منهم لا يعتنقون أدياناً .
أعرف من خلال الانترنت أن تقريبا ١%ـ٢% من الشعوب الصينية مسلمين .لكن يوجد في الصين مساجد كثيرة .لا تقلق أن لا تتمكن أن تذهب إلي المسجد للصلاة.
مثلا في مدينتي هانغتشو,عندنا مسجد واحد اسمه مسجد المنقاء. ,المسجد جميل و له تاريح طويل . تحترم الصين دين الإسلام جدا, أحترمه أيضا .انطر في الصور , الناس الذين يلبسون قبعات بيضاء هم من قومية هوي(إحدي القوميات في الصين)هم مسلمون..
هذه صور امام .عندما يصلون , لا أستطيع أن أدخل المسجد و أخذ الصور . إمام المسجد لطيف و نشيط . يقول لي أشياء كثيرة عن الإسلام مع أني لست مسلمة.

Notes:

1- The comma in arabic is written as "،" not ","

2- I don't know what you mean by القومية , give me what you mean with it in English.

I made a large number of corrections . But don't get disappointed with that. As most of them are not a necessary for the article to be understood by anyone. Your writing is good , I can understand most of what I read .

Don't focus on these tiny mistakes I corrected. What you really should focus at is to write sentences that are easily understood . Take this sentence for example , هذه صور امام .عيدما يصليون ,أعرف أن لاأستطيع أن أدخل مسجد و أخذ الصور . 

I don't understand what you are getting at. I don't know whether you can or can not enter the mosque when prayers are doing their pray inside.

My advice is to add flavors to the words as much as you can. Add words as much as you know to descripe what you mean.

Good luck , June.

About my native town

I was born and grew up in Baku. I like it very much. I think that I can't leave it for a long time, because I have here my family&friends. I like its boulevard,coming here I get relaxed after work. I like to sit in front of the Caspian Sea. Sometimes, I paint the beauty of my city. It is very old and also modern city. My city is famous with its Maiden Tower, Icheri Sheher (Old city), Palace of Shirvanshahs , ..etc . Day by day our country become more beautiful while new parks and buildings are constructed. The people who are reading this note may say that i praise ( overrate )  it , but it is not true. Tourists who have seen it can agree with me. Im proud of my Baku.

Note: Don't consider this a correction. I'm just a learner too. Regard it as an opinion.

I think more advanced users will help you with some sentences in your note which I think they don't express what you mean very well. For example, this sentence " It is very old and also modern city." I can get what you mean with this sentence very well. But I think there is some other sentence which will express what you mean better. But I don't have it either.

Good luck my friend.

I have just started to learn to play the violin. I love it so much. I hope I get to very advanced.