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    December 5, 2013
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    我对另类医疗的看法

    最近几年,尤其在西方有越来越多人开始信仰另类医疗,尤其是在西方(the word "尤其"should be use after your previous statement to describe a more accurate point or a more narrow area)。不知道你们中国人的看法是怎样的,或者你们有没有这样的概念,但对我们西方人来说另类医疗包括很多不同的医学法,例如:顺势疗法,反射学,针灸之类的。因为我是个现实主义者,所以我并不理解为什么这种治疗法有那么多的粉丝。我的意思是说,我们这个社会发展了,现在很多科学研究数据说明证明(“证明” is more strict than"说明",you can use "证明" in a situation that needs accurate description,but in everyday Chinese you can use"说明")哪种治疗有效,那哪种没有。我们现在有的应用or拥有的(“有的”has two meanings when we put them in different positions in a sentence.one means“拥有的” and another means "some of ...",the one you put here means "some of them")西药就是这样,被研究过很久很久。要是一个新药物会上市的话,在此之前这个药物的科学证明要求很严格。 


    我认为基本上有两个原因解释为什么这种治疗法越来越受欢迎。首先,有一部分人不太了解医学。他们也许想,因为西医还没找到办法来治好一些疾病,比如晚期的癌症等等,所以别的治疗可能有效。也有一些人有不同的主观疼痛,挪威的医生不承认真的是一种真正的病,因此没有合适的药或治疗。其次,有一部分人认为世界上除了你能看得到,听得到,闻得到应该有什么别的存在形式。这些别的存在不一定是一个宗教里面的神,也可以是你看不到的一种能源领域,鬼神,什么的。有些人也说自己有一些超能力,能和鬼神说话,听到他们的话,也能感觉到普通人感觉不了的事情。

    我尊敬各个人的信仰。这个权利对我来说很重要,不过我真受不了嘎嘎要占绝望的病人的便宜的人。我最近,因为我的姐姐一段时间前发现了他她(the differences between他(male),她(female)它(subjects or other creatures)的癌症复发了,就遇到过这种人。挪威的医生说她的癌症无可救药。一听到这条悲伤的消息,我们就上网开始查一查别的办法来试图治好她的病。我发现了网上充满着这种人。这些人卖的药物不但贵,也没有任何科学数据来证明它的治疗效果。有的人甚至推荐她放弃她现在受到的治疗,开始吃他们超自然的药。我的看法就是,要是这种药真的有效,那它立刻会变成正常药,西药。

    希望你们不误会我的意思,我也承认除了西医还可以存在其他有效的治疗。西医目前真的没有一切的答案。我只是觉得因为哪儿都有骗子,所以花很多钱之前,应该考虑一下性价比,而且 还有了解下这个人的声名。

    我对这个话题我的看法真的不是很黑白 绝对的,但因为我的中文水平还不太高,所以我觉得清楚地解释我的意思非常难。我也从来没有跟任何中国人讨论过这个话题,所以有可能有些词我用的不对,或不合适。谢谢大家的帮助!

     

    I'm really sorry to hear about that.

     

     I am a med student major in western medicine.As is for me,having grown up in such a environment that values tradition Chinese medicine so much is kinda conflicting because of my feild of medical education. Just like you,I believe in modern medicine(western medicine) so I chose this major and try to learn more about it in order to achieve its value,you know,to help those who need it.

    I have no certain attitude towards tradition Chinese medicine because many of the drugs haven't been proved that they're effective for sure,but on the other hand,some chronic disease can be remitted by using them,so,it's hard to draw a conclusion at present.

    Besides,I think science that I believe in is still developing(or may be I should say we are still discovering it?),what can't be proved can't be judged that it is wrong or right.As you said that it's not that black and white.

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