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- Zero Technology place in the world
Recently, I saw a piece of short news about zero technology places. In these places, there are no electronic, everything is natural and original. It seems we are back to the time of 1000 years ago.
Most of them are located in the US. I was thinking if we can book a room there on line.
I am from china, I know there are many ways you can contact this natural lifestyle and you don't need to pay for that, some poor places in China welcome your visit.
Anyway, what do you think about the technology? Do you really want to get rid of them? How long can you hold on a place without technology?
July 30, 201302 - My Mix tape When I was about 15 years old, I made a mix tape of my favorite songs at my friend-Susan's home, her father works at a film making company, there are a lot of professional devices at her home such as Rear projection TV, LD player, and other cool devices I could not call their names. I used to give her a kitty who was born by my mother cat, her family and she like this little creature so much. Her father took many great pictures for the cat, he captured the incredible moment of the cat. One day, We three friends (Susan, Alice and I) spent a wonderful and great day at Susan's home. It was the first time we went to her home before I told her that I liked a boy in my class, then I told her my plan about a mix tape. I intended to give him this tape as a birthday gift. Although my friends don't like this boy, they still would like to help me fuifill my plan. Finally, in a sunny Sunday, we gathered at Susan's home, not only did we make a great tape, but also we watched Romeo and Juliet in her personal cinema, the boy who has not been into me no matter how great the mix tape is and how lovely I used to be.March 10, 201301
关于中国生活费(这个题目有些奇怪,我觉得可以改成“关于中国生活费用的讨论”或者“浅谈当今中国的生活消费“
最近我发现在中国大陆,生活费已经成为一个热点话题。的确最近很多东西的价格最近增长了,例如:服装、(注意标点符号,请用顿号)食品、食油(食用油也是食品的一种),在外用餐,房租,交通费等等。并且,汽车和住房的费用都越来越贵。这个情况很日渐严重。大家知道在中国文化里,买车辆和买房子都特别是重要的事情,如果中国男孩性买不起房子,他也娶不起他就。(简而言之,买不起房子的中国男人,是无法娶到老婆的。)由于这些因素,因此,很多老百姓和有的经济学家很多网民和一些经济学者反映,中国的生活费用已经超过了美国。最近说中国生活费实在超过美国的。
评论:我认为你的议论文写的很好,观点明确,表达清楚且流畅。总体来说,这是一篇不错的文章。基本上可以不用修改,但是我觉得你也希望你的文章会更完美,一些措辞上注意一下就可以了。我不知道我的修改你是否同意,如果有不当之处,请指出。0 votedFebruary 5, 20131- Monday It is Monday night. I am sitting in front of my computer whilst studying English as usual. Some friends of mine, whose English are better than me a lot, but they never told me about that how they can do it very well, instead of that, they said they have talent and their work asked them to learn it. It makes me frustrated that they seem to say that to me I am this kind person who lacks the talent with English and my work and life doesn't require me to do that and they told me I have no reason to continue my English study. Thanks to their depressing words, which give me a hint and let me to know their real faces that they are not my real friends at all. In contrast, other friends, who give me valuable advice and helps all the time, particularlly in their encourages and warm comforts when I was frustrated in the study of English, for example they took their valuable time on correcting my essaies and others such as pronunciation, grammers, and uses of words etc. It mostly has been one year since I came this website. I met some good guys and then we became good friends. One of them is Terry, who is the kind of dog person and always going to help others without asking for any return from others. Thank you for all of them! And I wish them that they will have a nice year and make their dreams come true in 2013. God knows everyone and everyone's manner, he will give the good person a good future. Believe it or not.February 4, 201320
- Hobby I like listening to the music which are a variety of styles whatever is pop or classic.I am used to using my Ipod to listen when I am getting to sleep or reading or washing clothes that give me a deep relax.For example,when I can't go to sleep,I listen to chinese crosstalk that always help me to focus in the funny stuff while forgetting bad things in the day.However,some kinds of rock songs are not fit for listening at night.It is so noise that I become exicited then get hardly to sleep.In my spare time,I often dance with pop songs such as"I gotta a feeling""Call me maybe" which are simple and fast in melody and rhythem while being quite popular and easy to sing.August 21, 201230
- The moment I have took a lot of pictures since the first film camera went to our family which is an old Ricoh foolish camera at my 9years age.Many good moments we spent together which recorded them and stop the time on the pictures.Happy minutes we were together,day after day,year after year,my mother often smiles to them while viewing.I have not opened them for a long long time.I feel too tired to memory that the adults' life is not going very well,for that I don't want to see the careless past which is sharply compared with now I live in.Maybe I am as old as my gradmother while only memories leave to me.However,film's times has gone,it is lack of real feeling and touching for a paper of photo in this digital times.I will be remember a shy girl with unhappy face in the front of camera,because it was real me,no acting no pretending no matter where I am.August 13, 201230
