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    Well done! I try not to change your vocabulary and structure.

     

    今年十一月

    今年十一月美国要举行选举,有可能你们(你们有可能)听说过。每四年美国人(每四年)选择新的总统。奥巴马总统在争取连任。如果他获得胜利,他就不是新的总统。哈哈!根据美国宪法,总统任期限定在两个以内,一共八年。

    奥巴马总统是民主党的成员,对手是共和党党员。民主党与共和党是美国主要的党派。其实它们没有很大的区别,它们的用途只是为了美国人参加政治上手续(的手段)。在美国某个人想加入一个政党的(话),可以在地方选举委员会登记,就算(可以)了。

    奥巴马总统的对手是罗姆尼。以前罗姆尼(以前)是个风险资本家,也(曾当选)为马萨诸塞州的州长供职。他很有钱。还有,他信摩门教。摩门教跟基督教差不多一样,但是(也)有分别。除了圣经以外,摩门教教徒也信《摩门教书》。所以关于(对于)信奉基要基督教的人(来说),罗姆尼的宗教是一个很大的问题。信奉基要基督教的人讨厌奥巴马,可是他们(也)不会真心地拥护罗姆尼。这是矛盾。进退两难。

    不管十一月哪个人获得胜利,老百姓就(都将)失败。天下乌鸦一般黑。

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    July 13, 2012
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    earn my bread Are these sentenses correct? 1.I just earn my bread. 2.I'm just trying to earn my bread.
    July 11, 2012
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    this matter is still in the dark. vs this matter is still very unclear 1.this matter is still in the dark. vs 2.this matter is still very unclear Are these sentences correct?
    July 5, 2012
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    Is "this matter is still in the dark" correct? 1.this matter is still in the dark. vs 2.this matter is still very unclear Is the first one correct?Any other answers?
    July 4, 2012
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    nothing was taken vs there was nothing taken vs there was nothing being taken nothing was taken vs there was nothing taken vs there was nothing being taken Which one is correct?
    July 4, 2012
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    That is VS There is This is just the four of us. vs There is just the four of us. A photo shows a family of four, so which one is correct, or both are correct?
    July 1, 2012
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    get over sth. VS put sth.behind Can we just get over it? vs Can we just put that behind us? Are these two sentences interchangeable?
    July 1, 2012
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    on/under/into Back in the1960s, plastic was well ___ its way to becoming a staple of American life. what should we fill in the blank and why? on/under/into Examples are appreciated
    June 19, 2012
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    what is it with what is it with you and this baby vs what's with you and this baby vs what's with you on this baby i know the first setence is correct. How about the second and third?
    June 19, 2012
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