Careful people can avoid illness this was my English exam question:- write a paragraph of seven sentences about (Careful people can avoid illness) that is what i wrote: It's now clear that our health plays a very important role in our life and we can't do without it.From this point careful people spare no effort to avoid illness. To avoid illness we should remember some rules.First of all we should always wash our hands ofter and before a meal.We should wash more often in hot weather or when we have been to a gym. We mustn't eat food that smiles bad as it may be poisonous.We should always cover our food so flies can't pass their germs on to it . We should boil tap water before drinking it to kill any germs. We must try not to eat food from cans as it may be bad. If we do so,we will have a good health and never suffer from illness. any mistakes?

tripe to cairo last month i went to Cairo on a trip with my brothers. we set of at 8.30 am and arrived in Cairo at 11 pm. our first destination was The Hanging Church. it was my first visit to a church ever.our next destination was Amer Ebn El A'as mosque .it's a very large mosque where we prayed.then we went to The historic Cairo . there ,we saw Ahmed Ebn tolon mosque while was built about one thousand years ago. at Ahmed Ebn Tolon ' we saw a lot of touristic groups . the mosque faces mohamed Ali castle which played a very important role many years ago. after that we set of again to El Ashar mosque which is well known all over the Islamic world. after praying we set of to Kan El-kalili which is the best place to do the shopping in whole Egypt.we bought a lot of things and took lots of photographies. at 10 pm we set of again but this time our destination was home. we were both glad and sad to leave this wonderful place and surely we well visit another fantastic place in our beloved Egypt.

choose the correct answer if they didn't find him in time ,they...... saved his life a)would b)would be c)wouldn't have d)must have

my new school this year i went to a new school.it's called Kassem Ameen high school for girls. it's a very large school with two central building. each one consists of three floors .there are two bath rooms in each floor. there are 20 class room for the first year students.that is my first year at high school. our staff is very professional.most of my class teachers spent more than 20 years at teaching and there is a teacher spent 35 years.our headmistress is a very good woman who runs it wisely.there are 29 girl in my class but in the other classes there are more than 45 student in class. the 29 girls of our class are really helpful and they act as it they were sisters. i really love my new school

Sweet dreams I am going to write about my dreams. when I leave school in a few years, I want to go to the faculty of medicine. I want to be a surgeon or an oculist. When I graduate, I want to get the PhD from the UK or USA. I want to continue the procession of Dr. Magdy Ya'kop If I couldn't go to the faculty of medicine, I wish to go to the faculty of science . I wish to discover a cure to many fatal diseases like cancer and virus c ....etc. Now, I do my best to get high marks to be able to go to the faculty of medicine and achieve my dreams. dear friends,please,correct it for me.