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Q: Describe the most amazing site you've ever seen?
A: Last winter, when I traveled to Paris, I stopped by Eiffel Tower. The tower is high and beautiful especially at night. In front of the tower, you will see a variety of events. And many people who visits the place took pictures as souvenir. I can't forget the scenery. This is the most amazing site I've ever seen,the Eiffel Tower.
Q:What are the advantages of using public transportation?
A: Using public transportation has some benefits. First,i will not worry about parking lot. since i don't have a car.Secondly,i don't have to pay for the gasoline.
And finally, i don't have to drive a car myself, I am able to do lot of things such as reading book, searching for some information and so on. For these reasons,
I believe using public transportation gives us some benefits.
Q: Do you agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions?
A: I agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions.
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, the leader is able to get a variety of ideas from other people.
For example, I was a leader in a small group last time.
At first, I led study members my own way.
As time went by, they complained the progress and we were not able to get a goal.
From then on, I decided to listen to their opinions.And as we go along with our study we became more close to each other and we were able to obtain our goal.
That's why I agree that a good leader is someone who is also a good listener.
Q: What's the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work?
A:For me, the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work is to travel abroad.
there are several reasons to support my opinion.
First, I could experience many things.
For example, I went to America two months ago.
I was being mesmerized by their natural spots and have talked to
different people. I have listened to some opinions that makes
me reflect on myself and make changes for the better.
This is the best way of spending a perfect vacation away from work..
I appreciate your help so much. ^^