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Q: Describe the most amazing site you've ever seen?
A: Last winter, when I traveled to Paris, I stopped by Eiffel Tower. The tower is high and  beautiful especially at night. In front of the tower, you will see a variety of events. And many people who visits the place  took  pictures as souvenir. I can't forget the scenery. This is the  most amazing site I've ever seen,the Eiffel Tower.

Q:What are the advantages of using public transportation?
A: Using public transportation has some benefits. First,i will not  worry about parking lot. since i don't have a car.Secondly,i don't have to pay for the gasoline.
And finally, i don't have to drive a car myself, I am able to do  lot of things such as reading  book, searching for some information and so on. For these reasons,
I believe using public transportation gives us some benefits.

Q: Do you agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions?
A: I agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions.
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, the leader is able to get a variety of ideas from other people.
For example, I was a leader in a small group last time.
At first, I led study members my own way.
As time went by, they complained the progress and we were not able to get a goal. 
From then on, I decided to listen to their opinions.And as we go along with our study we became more close to each other and we were able to obtain our goal. 
That's why I agree that a good leader is someone who is also a good listener. 

Q: What's the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work?
A:For me, the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work is to travel abroad.
there are several reasons to support my opinion.
First, I could experience many things.
For example, I went to America two months ago.
I was being mesmerized by their natural spots and have talked to
different people. I have listened to some opinions that makes 
me reflect on myself and make changes for the better.
This is the best way of spending a perfect vacation away from work..



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Q: Describe the most amazing site you've ever seen?
A: Last winter, when I traveled to Paris, I stopped by Effel top Eiffel tower. The tower was high and was beautiful especially at night. In front of the top tower, there were a varity variety of events. and there were many people who who's took taking a picture. I can't forget the scenery. So the most amazing site I've ever seen is Effel top. Eiffel tower 

Q:What are the advantages of using public transportation?
A: Using public transportation has some benefits. first . i don't worry about parking lot. i don't have to worry about finding a parking lot. since i don't have a car. Also i don't need to pay for the gas price. (optional)
finally as i don't need to drive a car myself and finally, i don't need to drive a car by myself or i don't need to drive a car on my own, I am able i'm enable to do a lot of things such as reading a book, searching for some information and so on. For these reasons,
I believe using public transportation gives us some benefits.

Q: Do you agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions?
A: I agree that one of the characteristics of a good leader is that he or she listens to other people's opinions.
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, the leader is able to get a varity would be able to get  a variety of ideas from other people.
For example, I was a leader in a small group last time.
first time, I led study members my own way. the group members on my own way.
As time went by, they complained the progress and we were not able to get a goal.
So I decided to listen to their opinions.
We were getting close. We could get the goal.
So, Thay's why I agree with the opinion.

Q: What's the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work?
A:In my case, the best way to spend a perfect vacation away from work is to go abroad.
there are several reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, it could experience many things. 
For example, I went to America two months ago.
I stopped by a lot of attractions.
and I talk with a variety of people. I was able to listen to their insights.
after coming back, I could feel I changed myself. i felt some changes into myself
SO, That's why I spend my vacation going to abroad.



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