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IELTS TASK 2 WRITING
Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As the (you are not talking about a specific '具体的‘ technology, so you don't need the determiner 'the') technology develops, human-beings now have stepped into a new era-- the (here, you are talking about about a specific era, so you need 'the') information era. Being As a symbol of information era, the internet is playing a tremendous role in human society. Some people claim that the internet has more disadvantages than advantages, while others hold an opposite opinion. From my perspective, the internet is a double-edge sword with both advantages and disadvantages; however, if people use internet wisely and keep aware of the harmful factors, the disadvantages of the internet can be reduced to minimum.This is a very good thesis. It opens up the possibilty of exploring benefits, while at the same time clearly makes an argumentative position.
Without a doubt, being as one of the greatest inventions of since the beginning of history, the internet brings a lot of benefits to human-beings. Through using the internet, people can connect with society whenever and wherever they want. People will be able to know what is happening all around the world by looking at news on the webpages. In addition, the internet is a more convenient way of searching for information than going to library. Also, internet provide a platform where people can have access a lot of entertainment such as online games and social media. the Internet surely enables human-beings to live in a better way.
Since the above is part of your primary position, you may want to change the order so that you first talk about some disadvantages, and then counter with some advantages which outweigh the disadvantages:Para 1: intro/thesis
Para 2: disadvantages
Para 3/4: However/On the other hand, etc... -advantages (give MORE or BETTER examples)
Para 5: conclusion (why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages)
Beside the advantages, the internet also has some disadvantages. Since the internet provides a platform where everyone in the world can link with others, many unsecured factors are created as a result. For instance, criminals may heck hack other's people's computer and obtain their credit card information through the internet. What is more, there are a lot of temptations on the internet that may lead to addiction such as online games.
Although internet has some harm can be dangerous, users can minimized them potential risks through following advises. Firstly, be aware of unsecured factors always. Do not provide real personal information on a website that you are not sure if it is safe or not. Secondly, improve one's self discipline in order to reduce the possibilities of addiction.This paragraph works well as a bridge between 'disadvantages' and 'advantages'; so, I would place it is the 3rd paragraph. If you do so, then the essay will build towards your main arguement that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
In brief, although the internet benefits people a lot by providing a link with society and the world, the internet still has some be harmful, including unsecured factors and tempting content. In order to minimize the harm, people should always be aware of potential dangers and improve their be self-disciplined.Good work. Your misuse and underuse of the determiners <em>'the'</em> stood out in this paper, but that is a relatively minor grammatical problem. Keep in mind that whenever the word "internet" is a noun, it requires <em>'the'. </em>As an adjective, you will often see the determiner <em>'a/an'</em> used:
The internet is a useful resourse for scholars.
She started a business on the internet.
He works for an internet service provider.
She wrote on an internet webpage.
0 votedAugust 26, 20140Is that a correct sentence?
The registration number will be obtained after receiving the certificate.
It is unclear who will "obtain" the certificate, so I would chose another verb:
The registration number will be given out after receiving the certificate.（比较清楚)The registration number will be given to you after receiving the certificate. (最清楚）
0 votedAugust 15, 20141My daughter had a heat fever
My daughter is 2 years old, and yesterday she had a heat temperature over 37.5 degrees, so the nursery school got in touch with me. I said to the nursery staff, "We can't take care of her, and take her home".
I must have gone had to leave my company work to take pick her up earlier than usual, and took take her to a children's hospital. Before a pediatrician did a medical examination with her, I took her temperature with hospital's clinical thermometer. Her temperature kept was still 37.5 degrees, and it's which was not so high a temperature.
The pediatrician said the current her current physical condition was not so bad, and he can't judge didn't beleive she had any some a disease. We should keep watch her physical condition from now for a while.
Then I received a prescription from him, and took bought some medicine for expectorant of her, and went my I took her home.I'm glad your daughter is alright!
0 votedAugust 8, 20140My diary 01
My diary AUG. 08, 2014
This is my first note. Now It is 3:30 pm, Thursday. I’m sitting on at my desk and pretending to be busy. It is a totally awful day. The reason of it is that my boss asked me to handle our department training. But I didn’t prepare it enough as I had a lot of other work to do. So I was frantic this morning. I forgot printing to print the training table and prepare the gift which is for the trainer. What is worse, I forgot to have the trainer fill out the feedback form. My boss criticized me in front my colleagues (同事)when she found out I didn’t have the trainer fill out the form. In a word, I feel sick now.
I wish I can express my feeling in English more natively, but because of limited vocabulary, i cannot express it more vividly. Maybe you can help me and teach me other words? It's fairly vivid! But, a bit sad. We all have terrible days at work. I hope tomorrow is better!
Watch out for clauses with 2 verbs. The first tells time (tense 时态) the second cannot, so you need to use the particle "to" or an "ing" form:
I forgot to do my homework.
I needed to print the form.
I wanted to swim.
继续加油！
0 votedAugust 7, 201417th Of Aug.
Today is the second day of unemployed I have been unemployed. I don't need didn't have to work, so I don't feel tired as before usual, but I still got up earlier early to make breakfast and do some cleaning. After that, I went to learn English, . Even thought I did not remember one word, at least I am doing it.
Unfortunately, I went to buy things on the net... then see cartoons. Yes, I am really a female house girl, but I love cartoons and staying at home. There is a gay cartoon, called "love stage". It is very funny and sweet. I think it is more sweet than a regular love story. Although However, it is not reality. a true story There are no problem issues with gender if someone really loves you and cares you a lot. Don't worry, I am not slasher, not of like the leading role who is really looks like a girl, but is not. I can't not help thinking he is a girl.
Even though I said I like staying at home, because no one asked me out. I could also have fun outside. Have a happy day.That sounds like an interesting comic book. Don't spend too much time inside. Enjoy the summer!
0 votedAugust 7, 20141IELTS Speaking test TOPIC:describe a restaurant you like
There is a restaurant in my hometown---Leshan,Sichuan Province,China. (你能不能把这个饭店的名字翻译成英文吗？）
It is located near the Time Square. My parents and I would go there to have dinner once in a while.
It's a beautiful two-story house with two Chinese guardian lions in near the front door. A wood board, with the name on it, is hanged hung above the door. When we entered (to agree with the past tense 'would' in the next clause) the restaurant, a waitress would come along to lead us to our table and wait to take our orders.The hall is really spacious with blanket on it. (a blanket? do you mean the tables have table clothes?) The yellow light gives us a feeling of warmth.There are paintings on the wall,which shows a classic style (the word 'atmosphere' would work well in place of 'style'. You could say the paintings create a classic atmosphere'). The air conditioner never makes any noise whilst functioning well.
Over all,it's really a lovely place. I like it for its delicious food and its hospitality.Great work. As I mentioned in the comments, you could improve the structure and organization by first writing a quick outline:
Outline:
Thesis: I like ???, a restaurant in Sichuan, for its (1)food and (2)hospitality
Topic 1:
- describe some special dishes
- compare the food with other restaurants to show how it is better
Topic 2:
- describe the environment and the servers
- recount a good experience at the restaurant to support how and why it is a special place
0 votedAugust 7, 20144
