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    很恐怖的爱情喜剧片

    我今天下午想从收拾完我的东西后想休息一下,(对于已经发生的事最好加上“完”或“了”)所以我去咖啡馆放松了。他们的电视(一般不这么说)电视里在播放表现(电视不能与表现搭配)一部很旧的美国爱情喜剧,叫“Overboard”。

    电影的故事讲的是女孩从游艇掉了下来,然后在海滩上她被男生发现了。女孩没有(她是原先有记忆现在没了,所以用“失去了”)记忆,不能想出来她是谁(1、想不出来她是谁、2忘了自己是谁)发现她的男生告诉她,“你是我太太,我们有四个孩子”,然后她跟那个男生去他的家。可是,女孩其实已经有了个先生(或者可以说他已经有丈夫了),而且男生说谎了。。。。(这里没有并列的关系所以不用而且)男生利用一个不能记得她是谁的女孩(男生利用了这个不能记得他是谁的女孩儿,)所以这样他就可以有太太了,这么多么的恐怖的!

    Today I wanted to take a break from packing, so I went to the coffee shop to relax a little. On their TV, they were showing an old American romantic comedy called "Overboard".

    In the movie, a woman falls off a boat into the ocean, and is found by a man on the shore. The woman has amnesia, and can't remember who she is. The man who found her tells her "You're my wife, we have 4 kids together." and then she goes back with him. But she already has a husband, and the man is lying to her.... he's taking advantage of a woman with amnesia so he can have a wife, so creepy!

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    May 19, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself hello everybody,i am a student learning english now.although we have english classes for many years,i find its still a difficulty to express myself well in english.i have try many ways but little is very useful.so i really hope someone can tell me more about english :)
    May 18, 2012
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