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很恐怖的爱情喜剧片 我今天下午想从收拾我东西休息一下,所以我去咖啡馆放松了。他们的电视表现一部很旧的美国爱情喜剧,叫“Overboard”。 电影的故事是女孩从游艇掉了,然后在海滩上她被男生发现了。女孩没有记忆,不能想出来她是谁。发现她的男生告诉她,“你是我太太,我们有四个孩子”,然后她跟男生去他的家。可是,女孩已经有个先生,而且男生说谎了。。。。男生利用一个不能记得她是谁的女孩所以他可以有太太,这么恐怖的! Today I wanted to take a break from packing, so I went to the coffee shop to relax a little. On their TV, they were showing an old American romantic comedy called "Overboard". In the movie, a woman falls off a boat into the ocean, and is found by a man on the shore. The woman has amnesia, and can't remember who she is. The man who found her tells her "You're my wife, we have 4 kids together." and then she goes back with him. But she already has a husband, and the man is lying to her.... he's taking advantage of a woman with amnesia so he can have a wife, so creepy!

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很恐怖的爱情喜剧片

我今天下午想从收拾我东西(收拾完东西后)休息一下,所以我去咖啡馆放松了。他们的电视表现(播放)一部很旧(老)的美国爱情喜剧,叫“Overboard”。

电影的故事是(个)女孩从游艇掉了(下来),然后在海滩上她被男生发现了。女孩记没有(丧失)忆,不能想(回忆)出来她是谁。发现她的男生告诉她,“你是我太太,我们有四个孩子”,然后她跟男生去他的家。可是,女孩已经有个先生,而且男生说谎了。。。。男生利用一个不能记得她是谁的女孩所以他可以有太太,这么恐怖的!

Today I wanted to take a break from packing, so I went to the coffee shop to relax a little. On their TV, they were showing an old American romantic comedy called "Overboard".

In the movie, a woman falls off a boat into the ocean, and is found by a man on the shore. The woman has amnesia, and can't remember who she is. The man who found her tells her "You're my wife, we have 4 kids together." and then she goes back with him. But she already has a husband, and the man is lying to her.... he's taking advantage of a woman with amnesia so he can have a wife, so creepy!

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“恐怖”这个词或许可以改成“可怕”更恰当 东西还没有收拾完,但是想休息一下是吗?那或者你应该这么说“今天下午,我想在收拾东西的间中休息一下”
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很恐怖的爱情喜剧片

我今天下午想从收拾完我的东西后想休息一下,(对于已经发生的事最好加上“完”或“了”)所以我去咖啡馆放松了。他们的电视(一般不这么说)电视里在播放表现(电视不能与表现搭配)一部很旧的美国爱情喜剧,叫“Overboard”。

电影的故事讲的是女孩从游艇掉了下来,然后在海滩上她被男生发现了。女孩没有(她是原先有记忆现在没了,所以用“失去了”)记忆,不能想出来她是谁(1、想不出来她是谁、2忘了自己是谁)发现她的男生告诉她,“你是我太太,我们有四个孩子”,然后她跟那个男生去他的家。可是,女孩其实已经有了个先生(或者可以说他已经有丈夫了),而且男生说谎了。。。。(这里没有并列的关系所以不用而且)男生利用一个不能记得她是谁的女孩(男生利用了这个不能记得他是谁的女孩儿,)所以这样他就可以有太太了,这么多么的恐怖的!

Today I wanted to take a break from packing, so I went to the coffee shop to relax a little. On their TV, they were showing an old American romantic comedy called "Overboard".

In the movie, a woman falls off a boat into the ocean, and is found by a man on the shore. The woman has amnesia, and can't remember who she is. The man who found her tells her "You're my wife, we have 4 kids together." and then she goes back with him. But she already has a husband, and the man is lying to her.... he's taking advantage of a woman with amnesia so he can have a wife, so creepy!

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WOW THATS SO romantic lol^^
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我沒有覺得很恐怖,畢竟這只是在電影裏面,只是覺得很搞笑而已啦O(∩_∩)O

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