Could you correct my english in this text please?
When I get older, I would like to look back and see a complete life. I would like to have children and grandchildren, and good health in order to can enjoy them.
I would also like to have a comfortable life.
I don't mean I need to be a rich person, but i wouldn't want be worried about money at that age.
I think it´s important to have paid off my mortgage, have a good pension that allows me to pay bills, buy food, clothes and so on, while enjoying my leisure, maybe travelling or going out with friends. I like to be as active as possible.
I´m concerned about my hereditary family arthritis. My parents and my grandparents have this problem, overall it affects their knees, so their mobility and quality of life aren´t as good as they would want.
My mobility is very important to me , so that's a thing I am also worried about.
