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Could Can you please correct my English in this text please?
When I get become older, I would like to look back and see a complete life. I would like to have see my children and grandchildren, and a all in good health so that we can spend our time in happiness and joy. in order to can enjoy them.
Also I would like to have a confortable life. , I mean, I don´t need to be a rich person, but neither would I won´t want be worried to worry about money in at that age. I think at least it´s important to have paid my mortgage paid up and with a good pension that allows me me to enjoy life like eating well and able to buy things without worries. Perhaps a travel here or there and be able to go out with friends. paid bills, food, cloths and so on and enjoying leisure, maybe travelling or going out with friends. I like want to be as active as possible.
However, I am also concerned about my hereditary family arthritis. My parents and my grandparents all have this problem. , Overall it affects their knees and so their mobility and quality of life suffered aren´t so good as they want. Mobility is very important for me. It is my greatest concern. too so that is the thing I am more worried about.
Could you correct my english in this text please?
When I get older, I would like to look back and see a complete life. I would like to have children and grandchildren, and good health in order to can enjoy them.
I would also like to have a comfortable life.
I don't mean I need to be a rich person, but i wouldn't want be worried about money at that age.
I think it´s important to have paid off my mortgage, have a good pension that allows me to pay bills, buy food, clothes and so on, while enjoying my leisure, maybe travelling or going out with friends. I like to be as active as possible.
I´m concerned about my hereditary family arthritis. My parents and my grandparents have this problem, overall it affects their knees, so their mobility and quality of life aren´t as good as they would want.
My mobility is very important to me , so that's a thing I am also worried about.
Could you correct my english in this text please?
When I get older I would like to look back and see a completed life. I would like to have children and grandchildren, and a good health in order to can enjoy them.
Also I would like to have a comfortable life, I mean, I don´t need to be a rich person, but i won´t want be worried about money at that age. I think at least it´s important have paid my mortgage and have a good pension that allows me paid bills, food, clothes and so on and enjoying leisure, maybe travelling or going out with friends. I like to be as active as possible.
I´m concerned about my hereditary family arthritis. My parents and my grandparents have this problem, overally it affects their knees so their mobility and quality of life aren´t so good as they want. Mobility is very important for me too so that is the thing I am more worried about.
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