Weekend

오늘은, 친구랑(with) 하루(day)에서, 컵케이크 만들었어요(make). 밤에서, 음악 들었어요. 그리고 온라인 게임 했어요.
내일 가족(이랑) 같이 레스토랑에 가서 먹을 거예요.


Today, me and my friend, during the day, we cooked cupcake. On the night, I listened to music and played an online game.
Tomorrow I'll eat out with my family.

~Please explain what you correct. :D

친구하고(?) --> 친구랑 (with friends)

오후에서(In the night*) --> 하루에 (during the day)

*you literally wrote in the night (as in, inside the night) because 에서 is the particle of place of action, not time of action

컵케익 --> 컵케이크 (spelling)

요리 했어요 (made food) --> 컵케이크 만들었어요 (made cupcakes)

밤에서 --> 밤에 (see above)

가족하고 같이 아웃 먹 갈 거예요(??) -->

가족 같이 레스토랑에 가서 먹을 거예요.

family | together | to restaurant | go and | will eat

^doesn't make sense, but i put the respective english translations with the words so that you can see how it works out

疲れました〜

今日疲れた！　
今朝九時半ごろ起きましたから今はすごく寝たいです(～o～)　

明日は友達たちと一緒にショッピングモールに行きます。楽しいです！

ちなみに(?)、明日きっと忙しいです　（笑）
いっぱいの場所(?)に行きますからきっと忙しいです〜
それでも、楽しいですよね〜　友達と一緒にすごく楽しみますから〜（笑）

さて〜　明日のために今寝たほうがいいと思います！　おやすみなさい！


チアビ。(*^-^*)