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    Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life

    我每天早上七點起床。以後(之後or然後)我(會)整理床鋪。然後我(跟)洗淋浴,洗頭髮,洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙(了)。當我刷牙的時候(這時候),我會聽(一些)音樂。
    我會(習慣)用我的蘋果手機查郵件。然後我就去吹風頭髮,換校服和化妝。每天八點我吃早飯(吃早飯的時間通常是在八點)。每天我吃的早飯一樣(一如既往)。我看著新聞吃穀類還喝一被橘汁。我上大學以(習慣在上學)前收拾書包。然後我(就)去上大學(了)。

    每天九點我上課。我下了課以後就在圖書館學中文。我學習漢字。中午一點按說我跟我朋友吃飯。

    I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

     

    此類敘述沒什麼太大的問題 但是也沒什麽太大的文字價值存在性 有幾個中文連接詞語必須要改一下 然後東西才不會看的淩亂以及瑣碎.

     

    還有一個私人問題 爲什麽上學要化妝?

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    April 2, 2012
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