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Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life 我每天早上七點起床。以後我整理床鋪。然後我洗淋浴,洗頭髮,洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙。當我刷牙的時候,我會聽音樂。 我會用我的蘋果手機查郵件。然後我就去吹風頭髮,換校服和化妝。每天八點我吃早飯。每天我吃的早飯一樣。我看著新聞吃穀類還喝一被橘汁。我上大學以前收拾書包。然後我去上大學。 每天九點我上課。我下了課以後就在圖書館學中文。我學習漢字。中午一點按說我跟我朋友吃飯。 I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

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Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life

我每天早上七點起床。以之後我整理床鋪。然後我洗淋浴澡,洗頭髮和洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙。當我刷牙的時候,我會聽音樂。
我會用我的蘋果手機查郵件。,然後(我)就去吹風頭髮,換校服和化妝。我每天八點我吃早飯。每天我吃的早飯都一樣。我看著新聞(吃穀類?薯片?)還喝一被杯橘汁。我上大學以前先收拾書包。然後我就去上大學。

每天我九點我上課。我,下了課以後就在圖書館學中文。我學習冩漢字。中午一點按說我跟我朋友吃飯。

I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

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Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life

我每天早上七點起床。以之後我整理床鋪。然後我洗淋浴,洗頭髮,洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙。當我刷牙的時候,我會聽音樂。
我會用我的蘋果手機查郵件。然後我就去吹風頭髮,換校服,還有和化妝。我每天八點我吃早飯。每天我吃的早飯都一樣。我會變看著新聞變吃早飯,一般都是吃穀類,還會喝一被橘汁。我上大學以之前先收拾好書包。然後我就去上大學。

我每天九點我上課。我下了課以後就在圖書館學中文,學習漢字。中午一點按說我會跟我朋友一起吃午飯。

I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

多數情況是,我吃過午飯又繼續去上課。如果沒有課,有時我會去英國博物館。那裡很安靜。當我感覺放鬆够了,我會回圖書館繼續學習。 

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Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life

我每天早上七點起床。以後我整理床鋪。然後我洗淋浴,洗頭髮,洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙。當我刷牙的時候,我會聽音樂。
我會用我的蘋果手機查郵件。然後我就去吹头髮,換校服和化妝。每天八點我吃早飯。每天我吃的早飯一樣。我看著新聞吃穀類還喝一杯橘汁。我上课之前收拾好書包,然後我去上课。

每天九點我上課。我下了課以後就在圖書館學中文。我學習漢字。下午一點我跟我去朋友吃飯。

I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

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写的很好,加油!:)
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Preparing my chinese speaking presentation: Daily life

我每天早上七點起床。以後(之後or然後)我(會)整理床鋪。然後我(跟)洗淋浴,洗頭髮,洗臉。洗完後,我就去刷牙(了)。當我刷牙的時候(這時候),我會聽(一些)音樂。
我會(習慣)用我的蘋果手機查郵件。然後我就去吹風頭髮,換校服和化妝。每天八點我吃早飯(吃早飯的時間通常是在八點)。每天我吃的早飯一樣(一如既往)。我看著新聞吃穀類還喝一被橘汁。我上大學以(習慣在上學)前收拾書包。然後我(就)去上大學(了)。

每天九點我上課。我下了課以後就在圖書館學中文。我學習漢字。中午一點按說我跟我朋友吃飯。

I also want to say "Most days, after lunch, I have class. If I do not have have class, sometimes I go to the British Museum. It is very peaceful there. When I am relaxed, I go back to the library to study. "

 

此類敘述沒什麼太大的問題 但是也沒什麽太大的文字價值存在性 有幾個中文連接詞語必須要改一下 然後東西才不會看的淩亂以及瑣碎.

 

還有一個私人問題 爲什麽上學要化妝?

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