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It really depends on your personal style, but my corrections to this are in bold. My personal comments are in green.
Have fun
( If you want to use a salutation first, you should seperate it from the rest of the message. But for it to have better flow I would put it at the bottom of your message. and rewtite it, I will put my verion in bold below)
I want to havinge a conversion*ation with others in English to find some for fun.
Let's learn together!
*The word you used was "conversion", it has a few meanings in English. One is to change somebody to another religion.
Example of a sentence using "conversion": I am converting from Catholicism to become a Jehovah's Witness.
Or another example: I am converting my money at the airport, so that I can pay with the correct currency.
Another meaning for "conversion" is to find out what something is by different standards, like the exchange rate between American Dollars and Canadian dollars. Or covnerting something from Miles to Kilometers.
The word you wanted was spelled in a similar way, "conversation" is a discussion, or talking. But "conversion" is changing something from one thing to another.
0 votedMarch 18, 20121Have a happy day!
(for a journal style, you should make the salutation at the top. Like the subject line.)
It's really late in my country, but I don't want to sleep now. I know that it's really bad for my health, but I want to practice my English now and talk about myself. I want to say
I love travelling. China is really large, I would like to go there. that There are so many cities haven't been to . But now I want to go outside my country, I want to go to some foreign countries.
I really want to take part in the volunteer program which is called AIESEC.
But I have to pass the exam first. I'm afraid that maybe I can't won't make it. But if finally I have the chance to go outside travel ,maybe I will hope I can go to India or Greece. Greece is really beautiful. If I can would love to live living there.
Finally, I hope I can have a happy day , today. I'm a student and I have a chemistry experiment to do. It's a little dangerous.
Have a nice day.
Hi Liujy! I am a student too and you have me interested in AIESEC! I have some notes - you keep forgetting to capitialize the word " i". It is important to capitialize it because it is a proper noun. All proper nouns are important. In English people, governments, important places and Sciences( like chemistry when it is a subject in school!) always have their first letter capitialized. I remember to capitialize the first letter of my friends names because they are important to me. Some people may think if you do not capitialize "I" that you do not think what you are saying is important.
A lot of English speakers do not capitialize the "I" either- it is a very common mistake!
One more comment- many people who speak English as a second language use the words " really" and " very" too often.
I would suggest you use those sort of words less. You can make a strong, passionate statement by being very simple .
0 votedMarch 18, 20121First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi friends, I am here for to learn English, I can read and write English well. but However I am have poor in my spoken English. So I am requesting to all italki members to please help me to improve my spoken English.
Thanks and Best Regards
ANVAR.0 votedMarch 17, 20120First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am chinese high school student. I was born in 1994. In my spare time , I always do nothing. In fact , I am lazy. But Sometimes I listen to music and read books. Of corse I also do my homework. I wanna change myself by this website. To be honest ,I do not know why I want learn English. But I enjoy learning English, I love reading. I admire someone that is good at English spoken speaking English .and I hope I can become a person like them a fluent english speaker. I am expect to make friends here.
0 votedMarch 17, 20120- I am a business student, but I have not taken economics. However I think I can explain this "Brazil became a net external creditor and two ratings agencies awarded investment grade status to its debt. " The ratings agencies applied a status ( rating/ranking) the debt of Brazil.0 votedMarch 17, 20121
