First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends, I am here for to learn English, I can read and write English well. but However I am have poor in my spoken English.  So I am requesting to all italki members to please help me to improve my spoken English.
Thanks and Best Regards
ANVAR.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends, i I am here for to learn English. i I can read and write English well, but i am poor in my spoken English is poor. so i am request to all italki members Please help me to improve my spoken English. 

Thanks and Best Regards,
ANVAR

Friendly tips! ^^

Capitalization - Make sure to capitalize the personal pronoun "I"!

- http://www.libraryonline.com/default.asp?pID=48

The reason I crossed out "so i am request to all italki members" is because you already addressed us by saying "hi friends", so it's understood. ^^

Contractions - To make your sentences sound/look more fluid, try to change "I am" to "I'm". "I am" isn't incorrect, but most people would say "I'm" instead. "I'm" is what you'd call a contraction.

- http://www.enchantedlearning.com/grammar/contractions/