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Hi my name if Fay in English,Carmen in espanlo and 晴 in Chinese which means "a sunny day".!!! I love anime and I like to paint mangas in my leisure time!!! My favourite anime are "One Piece" and ""Hunter X Hunter " !! I wanted to be an illustrator but I am pushed to be a lawyer in the coming future because I major law in the university!!!! What a shame!!!
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    请批改我的书写><

    现在我学习汉语为了新汉语水平考试><
    请批改我的书写问题><

    1,请结合下列词语,写一篇80字左右短文.
    A,回国,帮助,不得不,遗憾,祝福
    B,开车,喝酒,要是,从来,后悔

    A,明天我要结束这个留学生活(明天我的留学生活就要结束了===》这样语序会好一些),我在上海交了很多朋友.他们都帮助了我的留学生活(他们在我的留学生活中给予了我很大帮助).我很遗憾因为我不得不回日本.今天夜里朋友们开了离别聚会为了我,(朋友们为了我开一个欢送会)祝福我一路平安.我高兴得活(话==》错别字哟!)都说不出来了.

    B,昨天我参加了喝酒聚会(一场酒会==》喝酒聚会一般表达为酒会).我被我朋友喝很多酒(灌了很多酒==》喝一般表示主动的,如果用被动句,则用被灌酒表示).但是,那个聚会以后我开车了回家(我是开车回家的).那时(所以==》用一个连词这样语义连贯)我遇到了交通事故.要是我不开车就不会遇到这么苦头(不会发生这样的事故).我从来不喝酒后后开车了(我再也不酒后开车了===》“从来”表示一般的现象,在这里用“再也”可以强调表达懊悔的心情。“酒后驾车”或“酒后开车”是固定搭配).现在我非常后悔.我决定了喝酒以后不自己开车.

    2,请结合这张图片写一篇80字左右的短文.
    因为我在这里不会记载那个图 ,请想象一下. 不好意思><


    A,2011年,中国国内生户总值(国内生产总值===》固定搭配)比日本多了.中国的经理(经济)越来越发展.现在,很多中国人重视钱财.以前我听过中国女性跟收入小(少==》收入的量词用多和少来表示)的男性不结婚(中国女性不和收入少的男性结婚===》这句话这样说语序比较好。).我听时候遗憾因为我觉得关于男性和女性的结婚最重要的事是爱.

    B,现在我有(了一个==》了表示”已经有了“,一个这个量词可以加也可以不加,但我觉得加了比较好(*^__^*) )女朋友.一年半前,我在城市里遇到了她.她很可爱.她也能体谅别人.
    我爱上了她告白了我的感觉(并且向她告白).从(----》这里不用加”从“更好)一年前我们开始了住在一起.今天正好我们的一年(一周年)纪念日.我给她一本(朵)花以(表达我对她)一年的感谢.

    请批改><

    如果你学日本,请告诉我什么问题^^

     

    加油加油^^

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    March 9, 2012
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    IELTS----The development of modern technology The development of modern technology has made people's life more complex, so people should choose to have a simple and easy life without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Thanks to the development of modern technology,people nowadays lives a convienient and sufficient life.But to those who don't enjoy high technology,life are becoming more complex and stressful. So,those people are appealing to get rid of high technology which hinders mankind from simole and natural life. Key board dispeared from personal computers;jams,yogurts,breads and cakes can be made by a multi-functional machine;all, including reading ,shopping ,listening to the radio can be done by several taps on the ceilphone screen or bewteen the clicks of a mouse.People are coaxed to own the latest type of high-tech machine ,and the newer ones keeps overtaking the former ones. Dissertation then becomes thicker and thicker, so people are pushed to learn more in order to operate those modern techology properly. All that above are superficial. With the help of modern techology , time and energy are saved ,deadwoods are recycled ,rights are protected .So people are able to have more spare time to enjoy simple and easy life.It is modern tecnology that make the world what it is now,so the idea of living without modern tecnology is undoubtedly inopportune. In sum, the development of modern technology has made people's life more convienient and enjoyable.I'm prone to modern technology and I love it. 写篇作文真是会花费毕生元气啊OJZ…………………………没法活了!!
    March 8, 2012
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    March 2, 2012
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    中国人帮助我!====>我看不懂俄语诶(是俄语吗?)!!就瞎猜了呀!!!

    - Как книга, которую ты вчера купил? Интересная?
    -Это очень интересная книга, рассказывающая об истории России. Ты непременно должен её прочитать.
    - 晚上买的书怎么样?有意思吗?
    -你这本讲述俄罗斯历史的书更有意思。
    Он каждую неделю убирает свою комнату, поэтому у него в комнате очень чисто.
    - 每星期他整理他的房子。他的房子是干净。
    Газета, которая лежит под словарем, сегодняшняя. Почитай.
    -词典下边的报纸是今天的。你看一下。
    Ты знаком с девушкой, которая стоит рядом с преподавателем Чжаном? Я вас познакомлю.
    你认识不认识张老师旁边的姑娘?来,我介绍一下。
    Фотографии, которые он подарил, очень красивые. Посмотри.
    他送的照片很漂亮的。你看看吧。
    Читальный зал, куда мы часто ходим, находится рядом со столовой.
    我们常常去的阅览室在食堂旁边。
    Рядом с библиотекой находится не читальный зал, а лаборатория. Читальный зал – напротив библиотеки. Там есть ещё студенческая столовая.
    图书馆不在阅览室的旁边,在实验室旁边。阅览室在图书馆对面。这里有学生的食堂。
    Кто сидит рядом с управляющим Ли?
    坐在经理旁边的人是谁?
    Старший брат просил меня сказать тебе, что он ждет тебя во дворе.
    哥哥让我告诉你, 他在花园等你。
    Мама, помоги мне: я ищу синий пиджак.
    妈妈帮助我- 我在找蓝上衣 。
    Посмотри те фотографии, что внизу. Они ещё красивее. Они сделаны моим братом.
    你看这张下边的照片。这张照片更漂亮。这张是我哥哥做的照片。
    Девушка, с которой я вчера познакомился, очень красивая.
    昨天我认识的姑娘很漂亮。
    Та машина большая, а эта маленькая. Покупай ту.

    那个车是大的,这个车是小的。买那个。
    Давай потанцуем. Прости, я не хочу танцевать.
    我请你跳舞吧。谢谢,我不想跳舞。

     

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    哈哈哈哈哈加油!!!!!

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    March 2, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi,my name is Fay!!! I'm now a postgraduate,my major law in the university. I love anime (such as onepiece,bleach ect.),and I try to paint sth from time to time.I enjoy digital painting very much.(XDD I always got A's in English test,but I started to worry about my English ablity after a job interview. I didn't know how to express my thoughts and I was frightened to death!!!! IT WAS SOOOOO EMBARRASSING!!!!!!! PLZ HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!
    March 1, 2012
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