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    Swimming

    I swim 2 or 3 days a week at a swimming pool in a university.

    When I started to learn how to swim, I drank lots of water while in the swimming pool. It entered through my nose, and it was painful, stinging like  being poked by a needle.

    After I'd had enough experience, this pain disappeared and I came to enjoy swimming.

    Summer in particular is the best season to swim in a cool pool. When I felt hot, the cool water around me continuously absorbed the heat of my body.

    If I had been out of the pool and doing any other physical activities such as running, I would have been easily exhausted by the heat.

    The only one bad thing is that the water in the swimming pool is not drinkable, though I could float on the water to avoid swallowing it.

    After I swim more than 500 meters, I usually feel terribly thirsty. But this is the only true shortcoming of swimming.

    Swimming is a near perfect exercise during the summer.

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    July 3, 2017
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    I had just finished dinner when the weather changed and it started to rain. ''Ah...nice." my dad said. Oh,I forgot, it's summer now. ''Finally, I love rainy days.'' I said.'


    'Hey,son." my dad said. ''I think running in this weather would be cool.'' ''Oh no!'' said my mom. ''I'm not going to let my son catch a cold.'' ''That's nothing, he's a boy. A boy is going to do exciting things'' said my dad. ''Okay, I'll leave it up to you.'' my mom said with sigh.' 'Let's go, son. It will be fun.'' ''alright,let's go!'' I said.


    A few minutes later, we arrived at a sports field near our house. The wind was strong, and it was raining hard. "Wow, so cooooooool!" "Let's run!'' said my dad. We ran around the sports field for two laps. 


    ''What's it feel like running barefoot?" I asked. "Do you want to try it?'' my dad asked, "YEAH! I think it will be exciting.'' I said. "Alright, but it will be painful.'' "No problem" I said. "I'm a MAN.'' "Ha ha, that's my boy!'' my dad said happily. Then, we ran barefoot across the sports field until we got tired.


    "Hey, dad.'' "What?" "I feel tired. I want to go home." "But it's cool outside." my dad said. "But someone is waiting on us!" "who?" "did you forget ?A BIG SWEET WATERMELON !" I said.

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    May 10, 2017
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    答案是to recover
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    May 6, 2017
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    Yeah, reading the sentences again the other two posters are correct. The examples Su. Ki provided are much more natural and commonplace. 

     


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    March 9, 2017
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    No. I don't think those are too formal. For the first one " The man that I borrowed the book from." would be more commonly used. Your sentence is also fine and natural to use though. 
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    March 8, 2017
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