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A Very Moved Moment That Made Me Cry Since I translated it into English,I wanna share it here.If there are some mistakes,pointing them out will be very appriciate. Tonight is one of the few nights that I don't go to sleep before 12:00am.Because today is a very important day for me,the birthday of two very important persons in my life. What the former matters is that without her,I won't exist in the world.Thank her for giving me life and raising me.Although she even doesn't know a single character,she taught me to become a kind and nice person and enlightened me.Without her demanding raising,I won't exist in the world;without her love and tolerance along with forgiveness as always,maybe I would be in jails because of my bad tamper.Yea,she is my beloved mother.I really appreciate for her love and selfIessness all the time.Happy birthday to her and hope she can always be happy and healthy.As for those wrinkles,never mind because she is the most beautiful woman in my heart. In terms of the latter,without her,I think I would lost my way in middle school,be fickle in high school and confused in college.Her positive and optimistic attitude always encouraged me when in middle school;Her peaceful and serene mind comforted me a lot when in high school;Her progressing and uplifting spirit stimulates me in college.Under her subtle influence,I gradually fall in love reading books.I am really grateful that she has been supported me silently for 7 years.Just like what she said,we have exceeded friendship to become family.I hope our“familyship”can be timeless.Yea,she's my favourite Rachel.Happy birthday to her and wish her happy everyday and can do what she wants forever as well as never be affected by some bad things in society. (PS.my bad that I remembered wrong her birthday a couple of days ago,I hope it's right this time) Toughed, because I never know I mean so much to him.On the contrary,he helps me a lot and he's a very good and old friend who I really cherish.And I told him that don't spend time remembering my birthday because I never cerebrate it and I never remember it either.But he and other good friends always remind me of my birthday and say happy birthday to me.I only celebrate a few important traditional Chinese festivals because I try to lead a very simple life to pay more attention to doing something I like. I really appreciate that my family and friends always support me and never force me to do something unwilling.Interesting thing is that my birthday is on the same day as his mother.

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A Very Moved Short Moment That Made Me Cry

Since I have translated it into English,I wanna share it here.If there are some mistakes,pointing them out will be very appreciated.

Tonight is one of the few nights that I'm not going to sleep before 12:00am. Because today is a very important day for me,the birthday of two very important persons in my life.
What the former matters is that without her,I won't exist in the world.Thank her for giving me life and raising me.Although she even doesn't know a single character,she taught me to become a kind and nice person and enlightened me.Without her demanding raising desire,I won't exist in the world;without her love and tolerance along with forgiveness as always,maybe I would be in jails because of my bad tamper.Yea,she is my beloved mother.I really appreciate for her love and selfIessness all the time.Happy birthday to her and hope she can always be happy and healthy.As for those wrinkles,never mind because she is the most beautiful woman in my heart.
In terms of the latter,without her,I think I would lost my way in middle school,be fickle in high school and confused in college.Her positive and optimistic attitude always encouraged me when She encourage me with her positive and optimistic attitude when I was in middle school;Her peaceful and serene mind comforted me a lot when I was in high school;Her progressing and uplifting spirit stimulates me in college.Under her subtle influence,I gradually fall in love reading books.I am really grateful that she has been supported me silently for 7 years.Just like what she said,we have exceeded friendship to become family.I hope our“familyship”can be timeless.Yea,she's my favourite Rachel.Happy birthday to her and wish her happy times everyday and I hope she can do what she wants forever as well as never be affected by some any bad things in society.
(PS.my bad that I remembered wrong her birthday a couple of days ago,I hope it's right this time)

Toughed, because I never know I mean so much to him.On the contrary,he helps me a lot and he's a very good and old friend who I really cherish.And I told him that don't spend time remembering my birthday because I never cerebrate it and I never remember it either.But he and other good friends always remind me of my birthday and say happy birthday to me.I only celebrate a few important traditional Chinese festivals because I try to lead a very simple life to pay more attention to doing something I like. I really appreciate that my family and friends always support me and never force me to do something unwilling.Interesting thing is that my birthday is on the same day as his mother.
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You're welcome Rachel. No problem :)
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@Chad thanks so much for your correction.Quite a long essay,haha
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It obviously would not let me space it properly when I pasted it. Sorry if it's a wall of text.
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Part 2: It's tough, because I never knew I meant so much to him.On the contrary, he helps me a lot and he's a very good and old friend who I really cherish. And I told him that he shouldn't spend time worrying about remembering my birthday because I never cerebrate it and I never remember it either. But he and other good friends always remind me of my birthday and say happy birthday to me. I only celebrate a few important traditional Chinese festivals because I try to lead a very simple life to pay more attention to doing things I like. I really appreciate that my family and friends have always supported me and never force me to do something I'm unwilling to do. The interesting thing is that my birthday is on the same day as his mother.

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