Would you please help me to check my grammar? This story is translated by me (Thai to English) ;D

In a cave, there lived a lion and a Bengal tiger.
They lived in the same cave for a long time.

The lion had been hunting on a waxing moon, for the Bengal tiger had been hunting on a new moon.

One night, while the lion was hunting,
there was a very strong wind that made him tremble.
He noticed that there was a waxing moon.

When the wind blew very strong, it made him very cold.
He assumed that the strong wind was caused by the waxing moon, for the Bengal tiger had been hunting on the new moon night.

One day, both of the animals talked about the weather.
The Bengal tiger explained to the lion about the weather that he had noticed. When the lion listened, he argued, and the Bengal tiger disagreed with the lion, too.

Both of animals roared loudly in the forest.
They prepared to fight with one another to prove that they were right.

At that moment, a hermit who was respected by both of the animals passed by. He told them that they should be calm.
Then he asked, "What happened to both of you?" 

The animals told the hermit the whole story. When the hermit listened, he explained to them about the waning moon and the waxing moon. Then, the animals understood clearly.


The lion and the Bengal tiger knew that the hermit was correct.
They didn't doubt that he was right. They decided that it was a small disagreement, and they shouldn't have argued about it.
It would become a famous story.
They reconciled, and then they thanked the hermit politely.

Thank you very much ;D

(You're welcome, good job!)