Would you please help me to check my grammar? This story is was translated by me (Thai to English). ;D

It was In a cave, it was a the habitation of the a lion and the a Bengal tiger.
They had lived in the same cave for a long time.

The lion has been hunting hunted on a waxing moon, for the Bengal tiger has been hunting no hunted on a new moon.

At a One night day, while the lion was hunting,
there was a very strong wind that made him tremble.
He enticed hoped that it was the waxing moon night.

When the wind blew very strong, it made him very cold.
He assumed that the strong wind was caused by the waning moon night.

ForThe Bengal tiger has been hunting hunted on the new moon night.

One day, the both of animals talked about the weather.
The Bengal tiger expounded to the lion about the weather that as he had understood it. When the lion listened, he the lion disputed the Bengal tiger, and the Bengal tiger disputed to the lion, too.

TheBoth of animals roared loudly in the forest.
They prepared themselves for facing each other, rather than back down that they were not refuse.

At that moment, a hermit who is was respected by both of animals passed by. He told them that they should be calm down, and then he asked what happened to both of you.

TheBoth of animals told the hermit about the whole story. When After the hermit had listened, he explained to them about the waning moon and the waxing moon. Then, the animals understood clearly.


The lion and the Bengal tiger knew the truth from the hermit.
They didn't doubtfulness doubt him. They thought it had just been was a little thing, and we they shouldn’t have disputed with each other.
It would become a big story.
They reconciled, and then they thanked the hermit mannerly politely.

Thank you very much ;D

Would you please help me to check my grammar? This story is translated by me (Thai to English) ;D

In a cave, there lived a lion and a Bengal tiger.
They lived in the same cave for a long time.

The lion had been hunting on a waxing moon, for the Bengal tiger had been hunting on a new moon.

One night, while the lion was hunting,
there was a very strong wind that made him tremble.
He noticed that there was a waxing moon.

When the wind blew very strong, it made him very cold.
He assumed that the strong wind was caused by the waxing moon, for the Bengal tiger had been hunting on the new moon night.

One day, both of the animals talked about the weather.
The Bengal tiger explained to the lion about the weather that he had noticed. When the lion listened, he argued, and the Bengal tiger disagreed with the lion, too.

Both of animals roared loudly in the forest.
They prepared to fight with one another to prove that they were right.

At that moment, a hermit who was respected by both of the animals passed by. He told them that they should be calm.
Then he asked, "What happened to both of you?" 

The animals told the hermit the whole story. When the hermit listened, he explained to them about the waning moon and the waxing moon. Then, the animals understood clearly.


The lion and the Bengal tiger knew that the hermit was correct.
They didn't doubt that he was right. They decided that it was a small disagreement, and they shouldn't have argued about it.
It would become a famous story.
They reconciled, and then they thanked the hermit politely.

Thank you very much ;D

(You're welcome, good job!)