Prensentation ("Introduction" is more precise.)

I am trying to improve my English (writing and speaking--Bueno. También, ¨writing and speaking skills,¨ con ¨s.¨ Si usa la palabra ¨skills,¨ no necesita los parenthesis.).* Spanish is my native language (si, perfecto)* and I study have studied or have been studying (¨he estudiado¨ o ¨he estado estudiando¨) English for the last 5 five* years. Learning this languages is very important for my me and for my job.

*¨I am trying to improve my English writing and speaking skills¨ o ¨I am trying to improve my English (writing and speaking).¨ Lo mejor es el primero oracion. 

*¨Native language¨ significa ¨mother tongue.¨

*Escribe las palabras de los numeros 1-9 en las situaciones profesionales. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone!

My name is Raúl. I am from Spain. I am learning English because I love the language and, moreover, I am a teacher a I and would like to teach my subject in a bilingual section.

Hi Raúl,

Que bueno su inglés! If you simply say ¨I am...and would like,¨ any English speaker should understand you fine, and your grammar is perfect. Saying ¨I¨ twice in the second sentence is a bit redundant, though still correct.

Saludos!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm an history teacher, and I want to improve my English in order (to get postgraduate studies)* in Europe... Thanksssss :)

*La mejor solución, en mi opinión, es ¨...in order to pursue a postgraduate degree in Europe.¨ Decir ¨from Europe¨ significa que el continente le da el título a usted. En realidad, una universidad va a darle el título. 

Hello everybody,

Ok, I forgot this social network. Sorry!

I'm Nicolás from Argentina. Today I discovered a very cool page for searching music. *He's The name is Jamendo. There are is free music.* Now, I'm listening to music I download from there. The band is called "Pornophonic." 
They do 8-bit rock. Very nice music.

It´s too* late here; I need go to sleep.

Bye.

(OR: ¨The name is Jamendo, and it has free music.)

(¨To¨ is a preposition. ¨Too¨ means <em>demasiado</em> o <em>también</em><em>, </em>in other cases.)

Things We Don't Need

I think we spend too much money on things we don't really need. For example, I bought the last mobile model. It's very cool, but really unnecessary. I also spend a lot of money on brand brand name clothes. Or worse still, my friends buy cheap and bad quality clothes, of course, always in style.

I think we buy because we don’t know exactly what we want and we fall in  (There are several ways to say what you mean: ¨fall prey to... (common English expression)¨ or ¨are persuaded by...¨)  hidden persuasions of  the hidden messages of big stores. Moreover, we believe we choose a product when in fact we are being induced by what we see on TV. 

If we chose more consciously we could save a lot of money that could be used  to for more important things, such as (¨such as¨ or ¨like¨) know value items and things to improve our health and quality of life.