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Things We Don't Need
I think we spend too much money on things we don't really need. For example, I bought the last mobile model. It's very cool, but really unnecessary. I also spend a lot of money on brand brand name clothes. Or worse still, my friends buy cheap and bad quality clothes, of course, always in style.
I think we buy because we don’t know exactly what we want and we fall in (There are several ways to say what you mean: ¨fall prey to... (common English expression)¨ or ¨are persuaded by...¨) hidden persuasions of the hidden messages of big stores. Moreover, we believe we choose a product when in fact we are being induced by what we see on TV.
If we chose more consciously we could save a lot of money that could be used to for more important things, such as (¨such as¨ or ¨like¨) know value items and things to improve our health and quality of life.
Things we don't Need
I think we spend too much money on things we don't really need. For example I bought the latest mobile model.
(The rest of this was corrected already and I am only making a very minor correction.)
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