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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello everyone my name is Simon and i have another name Mi An Qin in China .i am a student .i am learning English ,because i like English culture and i will work with English.i have a dream ,i want to make friend from italki.
my native language is Chinese,and i can"t stand my poor English i want to change it . i enjoy reading and play baskball. if someone would like make friend with me .i will bacome a good friend ,if you want to improve Chinese i will help you .When you start a sentence the first character should always be in capital letters. Please see corrections belows:
Explanations are in blue and corrections made are in green.
hello everyone my name is Simon and i have another name Mi An Qin in China .
When you start a sentence the first character should always be in capital letters.
Hello everyone. End the first sentence here itself and then continue with the second one.
My name is Simon and I have another name Mi An Qin in China.
i am a student .i am learning English ,because i like English culture and i will work with English.i have a dream ,i want to make friend from italki.
I am a student. I am learning English (There is no need to put a comma here) because I like English culture and I will work with English. (This part is not very clear. I suppose you want to say you will be speaking English in the company or you will work with people who are native English speakers. You can say I will be working with people who speak english or I will be speaking english at work.)
i have a dream ,i want to make friend from italki.
I have a dream. (End of sentence. Do not use comma) I want to make friends from italki.
my native language is Chinese,and i can"t stand my poor English i want to change it .
Don't forget first character is always capital. There are two ways in which you can write this sentence. See below :
1. My native language is Chinese. I can't stand my poor English and I want to change it.
2. My native language is Chinese. I can't stand my poor English. I want to change it.
i enjoy reading and play baskball.
Pay attention to you verb.
I enjoy reading and playing basketball.
if someone would like make friend with me .i will bacome a good friend ,if you want to improve Chinese i will help you .
If someone would like to befriend (befriend me is more appropriate than make friend with me) me. End the sentence and continue with the next. I will become a good friend. (Full stop here. Comma should not be in use) If you want to improve your Chinese, I will help you.
I hope it helps. Otherwise you're English is good. You can do better.
0 votedDecember 2, 20120- Dream Everybody have dreams and I am no exception. Some people want to become Doctors, Engineers, Lawyers, Teachers etc etc etc. To be truthful... these were the types of dreams I used to have when I was a Kid. At some point of time, I wanted to be an Air Hostess. But life isn't as we always imagine. I mean as we grow up our plans change. So did mine. I shifted from wanting to be a Lawyer, a Prosecutor, an Air Hostess until I lost my direction. Why? Because I has a drastic change in my plan of study. I got bored with my majors and I kept looking for something worth studying or something which could entertain me. Hmmm.... I can say I found it during my university. I chose the Tourism field because it was so lively and entertaining. I never found myself bored. I spent 3 and a half years having fun studying my major. I didn't even realize how time flew by. I graduated and started working in a firm as " Data Coordinator". Again I was so bored with my job. I resigned after 4 months and went back being unemployed. I started wondering what it is that could make my life interesting. Then I began looking at my past experiences. I thought I'd love a hotel job but I also want to experience a different lifestyle. Which is why I started learning Asian Languages. I decided to take my dream to another level. Today my dream is to be able to speak Chinese and Korean fluently so that I can work and live in China or Korea for at least 1 year. My dream is communication or you can call it PR in a hotel. I am still striving hard to make my dream come true. It may be hard at this moment but one thing I am sure of is that one day I will make my dream come true. Because I found the goal of my life.November 21, 201200
- I watched innocent man. I love it. I like five fingers, my daughter seoyoung, Vampire prosecutor, Full house 2 king of dramas and so on. I like some taiwanese drama too. but i seem to be watching too much of korean dramas. Im bored with American dramas. But i like ugly betty and CSI0 votedNovember 21, 20120
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is Joyce ,I come frome China .I am a student in college.I like meet any one who need help .If you have funing thing or bad thing I can share whith you .When I have free time ,I like singing song and dancing.I love watching moves.I am a fat girl,but I feel very happy.(你们好，我是来自中国的四川成都，我现在在上大学,我非常喜欢结交朋友，并且我喜欢帮助别人。如果你有高兴的事或者不好的事都可以跟我聊天，我非常高兴能和你分担，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞在我闲暇的时间，虽然我胖，但是我是一个乐观的女孩）
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My name is Joyce. (don't put coma)
I come from china. I am a colle student. I'd like to meet anyone who needs help.
If you have any funny or bad thing, you can share with me 你问他有话要说那么你应该说... You can share with me when i am free.
I love singing 你不需要说我喜欢唱的歌曲因为唱歌唱的一首歌and dancing. I love watching movies. I am a fat girl but I am very happy.
很高兴见到你胖女孩 ^_^0 votedNovember 21, 20120
