First notebook entry: Introducing Myself

My name is Joyce. I come frome China. I am a student in college. I would like meet any one who needs help. If you have a funny thing or a bad thing you can share it with me. When I have free time, I like singing songs and dancing. I love watching moves. I am a fat girl, but I feel very happy. (你们好，我是来自中国的四川成都，我现在在上大学,我非常喜欢结交朋友，并且我喜欢帮助别人。如果你有高兴的事或者不好的事都可以跟我聊天，我非常高兴能和你分担，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞在我闲暇的时间，虽然我胖，但是我是一个乐观的女孩）

If I have something, I would share it with you. If you have something, you would share it with me. The person who has it is the person sharing.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Joyce ,I come frome China .I am a student in college.I like meet any one who need help .If you have funing thing or bad thing I can share whith you .When I have free time ,I like singing song and dancing.I love watching moves.I am a fat girl,but I feel very happy.(你们好，我是来自中国的四川成都，我现在在上大学,我非常喜欢结交朋友，并且我喜欢帮助别人。如果你有高兴的事或者不好的事都可以跟我聊天，我非常高兴能和你分担，我喜欢唱歌和跳舞在我闲暇的时间，虽然我胖，但是我是一个乐观的女孩）

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My name is Joyce. (don't put coma)

I come from china. I am a colle student.  I'd like to meet anyone who needs help.

If you have any funny or bad thing, you can share with me 你问他有话要说那么你应该说... You can share with me when i am free.

I love singing 你不需要说我喜欢唱的歌曲因为唱歌唱的一首歌and dancing. I love watching movies. I am a fat girl but I am very happy.

很高兴见到你胖女孩 ^_^