ようこそ日本！

私は日本にいきたいです。日本のぶんか と りょうり と おんがく と 日本人がすきなのでですから日本にいきたいです！
4月に ともだちと日本にいくつもりでした。でも 私のともだちは、もういきたくないそうですもはやにいきたくないです！ほんとうに、私はかなしいです！
日本にいったらいくとき Osaka とKyoto とNara とKobe とHiroshima とTokyo とKanazawaにいきます！そして、Osaka Castle とShirakawa-goにいきたいです！でも、Osakaにいきたいです！いきたい。。。いきたい。。。いきたいです！
そして、さくらをみたいです！日本人のともだちとあいたいです！ラーメンをたべたいです！はしをかいたいです！日本でかいものをしたいです！
日本であたらしいのともだちとあいたいです！
あんないしてね ＾＿＾
よろしくおねがいします！

Summary of an Academic text

“U.S. COMMUNITY COLLEGES: A Gateway to Higher Education for Many”
George R. Boggs

U.S. Community Colleges are non-government organizations that concern about education in America, especially in higher education. (For college students.) Also, They will provides so many benefits if you have an interest in joining in this the colleges.According to George R. Boggs, a President and Chief Executive of the American Association of Community Colleges (“U.S. COMMUNITY COLLEGES: A Gateway to Higher Education for Many”, eJOURNAL USA, November 2005).

According to George R. Boggs, who is a President and Chief Executive of the American Association of Community Colleges (“U.S. COMMUNITY COLLEGES: A Gateway to Higher Education for Many”, eJOURNAL USA, November 2005), Reffering to Boggs, there are at least nine advantages that you are able to obtain if you join the colleges:. Such as, Lower Cost, Easy Transfer, Accredited Institutions, Wide Variety of Programs, English as a Second Language, A Supportive Learning Environment, Diversity, Access to U.S Culture and Variety of Locations and Campus Sizes. Those benefits give a students an easy way to reach their dreams, even for an international students too.

Although the Government does is not coorpeorate within the organization, However, U.S. Community Colleges prove that they are can stand by themselves. Either they, For each college, the aim is to get more students to have who want to get an opportunity of to have higher education. What about in Indonesia? Is it equivalent to them? Among for what they have done for increasing a quality of students? -> Have they increased a quality of students?

Despite, Indonesia provides a scholarships for the students, nonetheless, it's more likely for the students who have upper intelligencet. The government seems careless about it. Besides, there are still many poverty poor students that requiring require help from the government. Furthermore, they are also forced out of school.

The government of Indonesia should be emulate of what USCC do for the education. The education system in Indonesia is only focuses on the centre. For instance, the building schools in small regions are damaged and slum shabby. They can also have a high potential of being a having a quality of good students, of course if the Government wants to help them.

The only problem that caused so many students of Indonesia prefer to study abroad is lower tuition. Indonesia as a developing country should be able to fix themselves to the system of government through education. Not only focusing on corruption, but also education. This is so embarrasing for me as an Indonesian.

 

Hi Yan! I'm not a native English speaker, so please refer to native speakers' corrections if any. I didn't have time to review the last paragraph...so maybe I will do it tomrorow. See you ^^ 

こんにちは。先に日本語を書きましたよね？ 英語と日本語の運用能力が違うので、先に日本語で考えてしまうと、英訳は難しくなってしまいます。 たとえば、「私はいつか海外旅行をしたいです」を「私はいつか外国に行きたいです」 に変えたら、自分で英語にできますか? I want to go to foreign countries someday. お金と語学力が必要、というのも、「お金を貯めて、英語を勉強しないといけない」(I have to save a lot of money and study English)　と言い換えれば、自分で英作文できますよね。 まずは自分の持っている文法と単語で書ける文章を考えてみてくださいね。 自分で考えた英文を載せれば、ネイティブもチェックしてくれると思いますよ。 (英作文ができたら、メッセージ送ってくださいね。私も添削します)

I think 本棚 is the most often used. 本箱 is a box of books, so it must be smaller than 本棚.　i don't use 書棚 so often. I think it's a written word.