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a lovely girl , Teaching Chinaese as a sencend language is my major, So to be a teacher teach foreigners is my dream. It's a pity that i missed a chance to be a graduate student of WuHan University .
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    actually,you have a misstake ,because you think “需要”equel to“希望' in english. the usage of the two words are different.we can say: 我需要+（你们中一个人的帮助） 我希望+（你们中有一个人可以帮助我）
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    December 14, 2011
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    December 9, 2011
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    杂感——乞丐

    今天早上等车的时候，我被一位老头骚扰，他站在我前面不停地摇着一个铁碗、不停地求我着我的同情、（向）我（要）一块钱。我每次去火车站等车都会遇到这个人，每次都不给他钱，（但是）每次因为不给他钱，我都会感到很愧疚、（觉得自己）很小气。我为什么不给他钱呢？首先，我不知道他会用我的捐赠来做什么。其次，如果我给他钱，周围的老头都会过来，（虎视眈眈）。所以今天我又冷漠地拒绝了他，但是拒绝的时候，我的心里居然觉得十分难受，我竟然看到了我又憔悴又凄凉的要饭的样子，也看到了对面的人用冷漠的眼神看我。看了一眼忍不住又看一眼，最后才移开目光看手机或者手表或者浮云，只要不看我面前这个讨厌的老头就好了。。。后来，在车上的时候，我决定了，下次我会早点到站台，如果再遇到他我会请他去吃一顿饭，这样我可以安心地帮助他。由于最近越来越相信命运，现在想要知道这位老头上一辈子做了什么坏事，才会让他这一辈子遭到这么多不幸。

    1、口语中一般用“等车”不用“候车”

    2、“求”接宾语，宾语后不再接补语，所以删去“着我的同情”。

    3、“我”之前  缺少动词“向”

    4、“但是”承接上文，表示转折的语气，

    5、“虎视眈眈”是贬义词，用在表示贬义的句子中

     

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    December 8, 2011
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    introduce myself Taday ,i know the italki from a friend. This is the first time to use English to write on line First, i shoud introduce myself to everybady. I'm a Chinese,from LeShan which is a beautful and famous city, there is Leshan Giant Buddha and Emei mountain,which is known by everyone. To be a teacher is my dream, i want to help foreigners to improve their Chinese .my major is Teaching Chinese as a second language, now, some frends of mine work as a teacher abroad .I hope that my dream can come ture
    December 8, 2011
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