In my free time<em>s</em>.

In my free time<em>s</em>, I like to watch movie<em>S</em> at my home. When you watch<em>ed</em> movie<em>S</em> <em>at</em> <em>IN</em> your home, you can do everything what you want to do. You can make <em>a </em>noise, eat snack<em>S</em>, criticize the movie <em>whit </em> <em>WITH </em>someone, etc.

The most important that you can<em> DO IS</em> spend time with your family. 2 years ago, My mother was <em>IN A</em> car accident. After that, She couldn't walk. She moved by wheel chair, it's difficult to go<em>ing</em> out <em>OF</em> our home.

At first, She cr<em>iED</em> every day, <em>blame everything</em> and <em> WAS</em> upset all the time. It  <em>WAS</em> so hard to make her feel better. I think if she has activity she will forgot her pain and get better fast.
Watching movie<em>S</em> is a activity that we <em>ARE</em> doing together. She like<em>S</em> si-fi <em>AND </em>action<em>, BUT</em> <em>don't</em>  <em>DOESN'T</em> like drama<em>S</em>. Although <em>i</em>t is <em>ONLY</em> 2-3 hours that we <em>were</em>  <em>ARE</em> together<em>, but</em> I think it is the best time for me. Now she <em>don't</em>  <em>DOESN'T</em> cry. She <em>do</em>  <em>DOES </em>other activity ex. swimming, painting, cross stitch.

I think <em>the</em> <em> THAT</em> life is risk. We never know that what <em>it</em>  <em>WILL</em> happen today. So make everyday like <em>THE</em> last day of your life.

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Im really sorry to hear about what happened to your mother. Thats very sad. Im glad things are better now.

*Hope this helps! :)

The desire of a car

I always want to buy a car because I assume It can satisfy me by providing a private space.

The exponentially high costs of houses makes private spaces lavish.

With an afforded car, I can park anywhere along the sidewalk. Then, the square space where I park my car temporarily belongs to me. And sheltering by the car may eases me without being bothered by someone nor being worried the bad weather outside the car. Also, I can read books, browse webs on my phone with the comfortable poses and great mood.

Hoever, I found that what a car can provide me a public toilet can do as well. Since that, I don't have impulsions buying a car.

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I'<em>VE</em> always want<em>ED</em> to buy a car, because i assume it can satisfy me by providing a private space. ---> you have to add these endings so the words are past tense since your talking about something that been happening for a long time.

With an afforded car, I can park anywhere along the sidewalk. Then, the square space where I park my car, temporarily belongs to me. ---> i crossed out the part in red because its unneeded. What your trying to say can be understood without that part, so its just extra words.

And <em>MY CAR PROVIDES SHELTER</em>, without being bothered by <em>ANY</em>one <em>OR</em> being worried about bad weather.---> this is a better way to say what you were trying to get across. The words you chose before, made your point hard to understand. This is a easier way to say it.

 Also, I can read books, browse webs<em>ITES</em> on my phone with the comfortable poses and <em>A</em> great mood. ---> you have to say "websites" or "the internet" itstead of "webs". Its the pages on the internet that theres more than one of, not the web itself. Theres only one internet. Also the term "comfortable poses" isn't really used in English.

Hoever, I found that what a car can provide me a public toilet can do as well. Since that, I don't have impulsions buying a car. ---> i can exactly tell what you were trying to say here, so i cant correct it. Sorry. Im sorry whatever it is has made you change your mind about wanting a car too lol

Hope this helps! =)

Hello.

Hi. My name is luis angel... Im from cancun mexico, i have 21 year old.. I need learn more english ,

A corrected version of this would read:

Hello. My Name is Luis Angel. Im from Cancun Mexico. I am 21 years old. I need TO learn more English.

You have to remember to use periods to end sentences and to make the first letter of every new sentence uppercase. Other than that, it was pretty good. Hope this helps.