I'm  (WILL) Keeping trying!

When I'm about to start a note in here. Actually I don't know what I'm going to write about, but it may be is a good idea to write something regarding my experience here in italki.

To start with, I would say that I have no DONT HAVE much experience in this site. I just enrolled in it yesterday, and my principal intention is to meet people I can talk with, you see... I'm not so VERY fluent in English, but I need it.

Obviously I also like the idea to OF helping others with the Spanish language, most of all (it is better to say "most of everything"?) with the speaking, so thank you all for sharing your knowledge!

Had a few small mistakes here and there, but it was mostly pretty good! Hope these small notes helped

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I'm Keeping trying!

When I'm about to start a note in here, I actually don't know what I'm going to write about, but I think it maybe a good idea to write something regarding my experience here in italki.

To start with, I would say that I have not much experience in this site. I just enrolled in italki yesterday, and my principal intention is to meet people I can talk with.  You see, I'm not so fluent in English, but I need to be.

I also like the idea of helping others with the Spanish language, most of all (it is better to say "most of everything"? No "most of all' is correct here) with the speaking.  So, thank you all for sharing your knowledge!