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Hi, this is Corry, I would like to suggest the following:
To track - means to follow someone to note their location but if you are going to use it like this " track someone to do something" then I would suggest that you use the word: Find or look for someone to do something - which is more appropriate in an everyday conversation.
I hope I was able to help you. Have a great day.
0 votedAugust 15, 20170Yesterday . I was meeting with American
Yesterda. Yesterday, While I was eatinG in a restaurant, some guy came to my table in a restaurant. He did wanted to talk with my sister but she didn't couldn't speak English So she he told me please could you help me to translate? And I said replied yes but my English is horrible. For 30 min I Could Speak with him, I think so. So, I think I was able to speak with him for 30 minutes.
I felt motivated to be better in this lenguaje.Hello Jose, thank you for putting an effort to write down your interesting experience, but I would like to help you improve your english more, I put some corrections, yesterday spelling was not correct. Use wanted instead of did want. In English when you say " some guy" that means you are referring to a man so use the pronoun he. I hope I was able to help you in some way.
0 votedFebruary 8, 20151My aunt
Thank for reading my entry and I hope that you'll correct every word I've made in the this entry.
I have not don't only have the best parents but also the best anut aunt in this world. She is my father's sister. She lives with us and loves us a lot very much.
My aunt is about forty-five years old but she is still single. She works as a housekeeper. She is very kind and maternal. She takes care of my sister and me and buys us many things such as books, food and clothing. She is a quite woman. She enjoys reading newspapers, watching HongKong Chinese movies from Hongkong and cooking. I love every dishes she makes because they are really delicious.
My aunt grew up at a poor and unhappy family. She have been working earned for living since she was 12 years old. She have never been loved by her own parents. However, her aunt, a kind-hearted woman, have taken took care of her. She always teach us to appreciate our parents's love and care and don't make them disappointed.
My aunt loves to smiling smile. She says that a laughter is the best medicine, so she always tells us funny and meaningful stories.
I love my aunt. I will make her smile everydayHello flytosky, Your notebook entry is heartwarming, you are lucky to have such a great aunt. I made some corrections on your entry and I hope that you will learn something from my corrections. Take time to check your work before submitting your entry, the mistakes are actually minimal, check your spelling all the time and remember the subject - verb agreement in the English grammar. Have a great day.
0 votedJune 13, 20131- For these sentences : I wouldn't have been kept in the dark if I had gone to the class? or I wouldn't have been kept in the dark if I went to the class yesterday. - the second sentence is correct. Things to remember when writing sentences with modal verbs: 1. We can use these modal verbs (also called modals of deduction, speculation or certainty) when we want to make a guess about something. We choose the verb depending on how sure we are. 2.would + have + past participle can be used to make an assumption about something that has probably happened, if everything is as we expect.0 votedMay 17, 20130
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello everyone!
I come from Beijing China, now, I am a junior in college.
I can passed my english exams in college and can read some english stories, but when i must to speak english, I find it's very hard to for me, so that's why i want to learn spoken english.
I want to speak to many foreign friends and I hope that the day will come soon.Notes:
1. Name of a country should start in capital letters because it is a proper noun.
2. passed - is the past tense for pass. The exam had already been taken so it is proper to use the past tense.
0 votedMay 17, 20130Send you a letter to a friend and tell you about your last dream.Use the past simple and continuous.
Dear Mikel,
Last night I had a nightmare.My dream was rather strange, but it was very short because I woke up afraid. So I was in the office and I was looking for a (1) pair of scissors when the boss nailed(2) me it in my stomach, and I began to bleed so much. I asked myself; Why he did it? Maybe he was angry with me...but I think it's right. I wasn't feeling any pain in my body,this situation is very typical in (3)the dreams, but I felt that (4)me I could die, because I was bleeding. Nobody was approaching (5)meto my body to help me, it I was (6)lay laying on the floor and the people (7) was were indifferent. After five (8) minuts minutes, Peter came at the office and he saw me, I had the my eyes (9) almost close half open when he (10)took up picked me up I(11) was hearing the heard my boss laugher laughing...and I suddenly woke up of my dream.
Note: 1. you should write - a pair of scissors (since always comes in pairs)
2. Don't use me when you have my in the sentence - it means the same thing and It will only make your sentence grammatically incorrect.
3. I also notice that you use articles such as: a the very often even if it is not needed.
4. Instead of me use "I"
5. Again you used me in the wrong context.
6. I was lay - is wrong use the present perfect tense of the word "laying"
7. People is plural so you should use "were" instead of was.
8. spelling correction on minutes.
9. it is more appropriate to say " I had my eyes half open" instead of "I had my eyes almost close"
10. took up is the past tense of take but in your letter, you are being picked up by somebody since you are bleeding so it is better to use the term " picked up"
11. I was hearing is incorrect since we have a past tense for hearing which is "heard" so its better to write " I heard my boss laughing".
0 votedMay 9, 20130Write a letter applying for a job
Write a letter applying for a job. You describe your qualities as a person and
explain why you think you are the perfect candidate for the post. Write your letter.
To Digital Controller Company:
My name's Toni, I'm 27 and I'm from Spain. Let me introduce my self, I am Toni from Valencia, Spain and I am 27 years old. I have an a degree in Electronic Engineering degree.I am very interested in you advertisement job. your job advertisement. I like have a passion for electronics and programming field as wells as robotic engineering. If given a chance, I'd like to contribute to the success of your company and I promise to give my best in everything I do. for give it the the best that I know to do I'm an apassionate of the electronic and robotics engineering.I have knowledge in programmer programming and design circuits so because I have so much experience in this field. I've worked in other sites like Analogger and Faconell companies, so I assure you that I got have skills in this field.
I considerate consider myself a as a well -organise and efficient person, I also enjoy working as part of a team and I am but I can also perform good at working on my own. I believe that I am hardworking and I am used to can work even under pressure. I have a driving license and I'm capable available to travel anywhere.
Best regards.
To Human Resources Department.Note: hello toni, you have to be concious of your grammar specially on subject-verb agreement and your letter should look like this:
Date: May 10, 2013
To Digital Controller Company
Human Resources DepartmentDear Sir/Madam,
Let me introduce my self, I am Toni from Valencia, Spain and I am 27 years old. I have a degree in Electronic Engineering. I am very interested in your job advertisement. I have a passion for electronics and programming as wells as robotic engineering. If given a chance, I'd like to
contribute to the success of your company and I promise to give my best in everything I do. I have knowledge in programming and design circuits because I have so much experience in this field. I've worked in other sites like Analogger and Faconell companies, so I assure you that I have skills in this field.I consider myself as a well -organize and efficient person, I also enjoy working as part of a team but I can also perform on my own. I believe that I am hardworking and can work even under pressure. I have a driving license and capable of travelling anywhere.
Best regards. Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Toni
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