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My aunt Thank for reading my entry and I hope that you'll correct every I've made in the entry. I have not only the best parents but also the best anut in this world. She is my father's sister. She lives with and loves us a lot. My aunt is about forty-five years old but she is still single. She works as a housekeeper. She is very kind and maternal. She takes care of my sister and me and buys us many things such as book, food and clothing. She is a quite woman. She enjoys reading newspapers, watching HongKong movies and cooking. I love every dishes she makes because they are really delicious. My aunt grew up at a poor and unhappy family. She have earned for living since she was 12 years old. She have never been loved by her own parents. However, her aunt, a kind-hearted woman, have taken care of her. She always teach us to appreciate our parents's love and care and don't make them disappointed. My aunt love smiling. She says that a laughter is the best medicine, so she always tells us funny and meaningful stories. I love my aunt. I will make her smile everyday

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My aunt

Thank for reading my entry and I hope that you'll correct every word I've made in the this entry.
I have not don't only have the best parents but also the best anut aunt in this world. She is my father's sister. She lives with us and loves us a lot very much.
My aunt is about forty-five years old but she is still single. She works as a housekeeper. She is very kind and maternal. She takes care of my sister and me and buys us many things such as books, food and clothing. She is a quite woman. She enjoys reading newspapers, watching HongKong Chinese movies from Hongkong and cooking. I love every dishes she makes because they are really delicious.
My aunt grew up at a poor and unhappy family. She have been working earned for living since she was 12 years old. She have never been loved by her own parents. However, her aunt, a kind-hearted woman, have taken took care of her. She always teach us to appreciate our parents's love and care and don't make them disappointed.
My aunt loves to smiling smile. She says that a laughter is the best medicine, so she always tells us funny and meaningful stories.
I love my aunt. I will make her smile everyday

 

 

Hello flytosky, Your notebook entry is heartwarming, you are lucky to have such a great aunt. I made some corrections on your entry and I hope that you will learn something from my corrections. Take time to check your work before submitting your entry, the mistakes are actually minimal, check your spelling all the time and remember the subject - verb agreement in the English grammar. Have a great day.

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