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    腊月廿八于外公家飧   Dinning At Maternal Grandpa's on the 28th of the last mouth of the Chinese lunar calendar

    愁红惨绿春将至,   The red signs of spring  are sad, the green door are pained with the  coming spring,
    凄风苦雨浇喜气。   The sorrowful winds,bitter rain dampens the atmostphere of joy.   
    粗息重喘近耳旁,   Uneven is the breathing, heavy are the moans to my ears,
    玉食珍馐难下咽。   Hard it is to eat such delicacies in front of me.
    冷炙巨石腹中坠,   Cold are the roasts like boulders going into my stomach,
    郁郁千斤抵胸前。   Such is the weight I had to bear in my chest.
    干枝枯手不忍望,   These withering gnarly hands I bear not look,
    昔日珠瞳琉光失。   The brightness of yesteryears in his eyes are now long gone.
    嶙峋瘦骨苍老尽,   The meagre body is nothing but old,

    缥缈生火残喘兮。   Alas, gasping for the last flicker of his life's fire.
    缠绵病榻数年载,   Long is this illness he has,
    数斗丹药如饭食。   Medicines are now the rice he eats.
    儿孙相顾甚痛心,   How his children and grandchildren grieve with him,
    实难得此开心颜。   'Tis hard to have a happy face.
    绵绵此期何时尽?   How long will this last?  
    只盼能得人常在。   Just hope that we'll be longer together.

    Here, thank you very much for those ones helped me in correcting this piece. Thank you Jeff and Tommy. It was painful for me to look through it time and time again and I even need to correct it. I am so happy I finish it finally. It really costs many days. However I finish it. If there are some errors,please point them out for me. Thank you.

     

     

     

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    January 25, 2012
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    January 25, 2012
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    观电视有感 铁血男儿 戎马半生状豪情, 铁血雄心踏风浪。 风嗥云涌吞万象, 巍峨之巅问江山。 帝王业 戎马背,一世豪情。家国志,生死无悔。狼烟起,风云剧变。问苍穹,谁主沉浮? 美人怀,风流相随。丝竹起,莺燕绕梁。畅宴饮,金杯莫歇。金銮殿,天上蓬莱。
    January 22, 2012
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    January 21, 2012
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    年二八于外公家食 愁红惨绿春将至, 凄风冷雨浇喜气。 粗息重喘近耳旁, 玉食珍馐难下咽。 冷炙巨石腹中坠, 郁郁千斤抵胸前。 干枝枯手不忍望, 昔日珠瞳琉光失。 朗朗清骨苍老尽, 渺渺生火残喘兮。 缠绵病榻数年载, 数斗丹药如饭食。 儿孙相顾甚痛心, 实难得此开心颜。 绵绵此期何时尽? 只盼能得人常在。
    January 20, 2012
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    画图的想象力(有图^^)说实话,我从来没有这么用过。^ ^ 画图的想象力!?

    从小我就对画图画1感兴趣。虽然我的主修经金融2,可是我每个礼拜至少会画一幅图画3。在我还没画图(画)之前我不会打算计划要画什么的。,当我方鼠标在屏幕上图会突然在心眼揭露。4我连到现在都觉得这是件非常奇特的事情。
    1画图一般指画图样或地图等,需要一定的专业知识。这里用画画比较好。

    2你是想表达My major is Finance? 那么有两种表示:1我主修金融。2我的专业是金融学。

    3“图" 和“画”是有一点区别的。图可以指比较简单的几何图形,也可以指复杂的地图、建筑结构图等。而“画”一般就指艺术领域里的画。不过我觉得可以不必追究得那么细,没什么必要。

    4这里的鼠标是指鼠标的图标,“放鼠标在屏幕上”这个说法是有问题的。我觉得这样表达比较好:但当我把鼠标移到屏幕上时,我的灵感就会突然闪现。

    “图在脑海中浮现”这个说法也有点问题。浮现的对象多是人的形象、印象、往事、表情等: eg 往事又浮现在眼前 他的话又浮现在我脑海里 脸上浮现出喜悦的神情 她的倩影又浮现在我脑海里

    有些人用文字来表达他们的性心情,、意见,等等。我希望有一天我能在工作上不知何故得(不太明白你想表达什么意思)用这个才能来帮助别人。

    在英语中有个很有名的句子:一幅图等于一千字。“A picture is worth a thousand words”。读者们,您你们5同意吗?

    5因为你前面用了“读者们”,“们”代表复数,所以后面也要用复数的“你们”。

    我也喜欢画画,不过我都是在纸上涂鸦,不怎么用电脑作图,因为对着电脑眼睛很累,还有辐射。^ ^

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    January 17, 2012
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    My First Riding Experience The horse was so muscular. It was the first time for me watching a horse so close. It had such a big rump and strong hind legs. I believed if I was kicked by them, all of my ribs could fracture. Of course I was not too stupid to irritate it, and it looked like very tame. It had beautiful and gentle eyes, which seemed the lake under the moonlight. Its eyelash are long and thick, whose shape was like a Chinese paper fan. I had imagined many times I ride on a horse like a heroine, raising highly my spear and rushing to the enemy. You could imagine how excited I was at that time. I caught the saddle then swung myself into it. Sitting on the back of the horse, I was inflated with pride. I felt I was a true soldier. However the horse started to trot along the track, I was not ready then. I heard the coach shouting out “Bend waist!” behind me. Alas! I totally fogot it. I felt myself was thrown up by the horse and dropped down just like a fool. How funny I was! I totally could not keep pace with the tempo of the horse’s. Everytime I clamped the horse’s belly, its nose would jet out air. To be honest, the sound scared me a bit. I thought it must be not comfortable, then I didn’t clamp its belly any more. What I could do the only two things are catching the saddle firmly and bending my waist as possible as I could. I didn’t think of the heroine dream. So embressed I was then. The only matter in my head was why this track was so long! I almost could not hold on. What the scene playing on in action movies was completely false, how could the players feel comfortable on the back of a running horse! Then something worse happened, my glasses slipped down the bridge of my nose, which was like adding fuel to the fire. I had to loosen my right hand to push the glasses up. What a risky action, but I didn't think of it then. At last I got to the destination. Thank goodness, I could not stand the jolt any more. I climbed off the horse like a tired bear. My thighs were numb and I felt the ground was shaking. I and my friend laughed at each other for our actions today. Though it was lousy, I felt very happy. Haha, I shall try once more next time.
    January 16, 2012
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    Daughter in Red-One Kind of Chinese Wine Daughter in red is one kind of Chinese wine. There is a legend about its origin. Once upon a time, there was a tailor in the countryside of Shaoxing. His wife was pregnant. He thought the child shall be a son. He intended to have a celebration when his child was born, so he requested a famous brewster to brew some fine rice wine to celebrate with his relatives and friends at that time. However, things went contrary to his wishes, his wife gave birth to a daughter, which is like pouring cold water on his eager heart. He was so disappointed that he buried these wine under the osmanthus tree at the backyard. Time fled, the girl grew up into a smart girl with good features and was likeable. She was fully conversant with tailoring, and embroidered very well. The business of the tailor’s became better and better. The tailor was so happy and decided to let his daughter marry his best apprentice. At the wedding night, he suddenly remembered the wine he buried more than ten years ago. Then he dug them out and shared them with the attend. When he unveiled the lids, the full-bodied fragrance floated out of the container. The wine with mellow flavor was so tasty and left endless aftertaste in people. Then people called it “Daughter in Red” or “Daughter Wine”. Afterward, when people there gave birth to daughters, they buried some wine under the ground as well. Then they dug out these wine when their daughters got married. It gradually evolved into a local custom.
    January 14, 2012
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    美国早餐的谷物早餐

    一个礼拜前我和我的大哥哥1在讨论我最喜欢吃的谷物(早餐吃得的)。我告诉他“Corn Pops”是我最爱的早餐之一。为什么?因为这种谷物有又甜又轻。我一想到CornPops就会让我流口水啦。它的味道就好像爆米花被浸在浓密2糖水里。那时刻大哥哥没说什么(没发表什么意见),他看起来好像在沉思想3别的东西(事情)。四天前我回到大学。当我准备出门【的那时?】的时候,大哥哥拿出一个塑胶(料)袋,叫(让)我打开看看揭露里面的东西。我只好顺从地服从他的命令4撕掉那个袋子。那刹那掉出来的是我亲爱(故意用的着词汇)的CornPops.
    大哥哥,上帝应该赐给你一个皇冠子!

    1 我的大哥哥,你是指你的亲哥哥,还是指你认识的一位哥哥?如果是前者,那么这句话就得改成“我和我的大哥”;如果是后者,就改成“我和一位哥哥”。还有,“大哥哥”是小朋友用来称呼别人的,一般成年人不这样叫。^ ^

    2 浓密的用法:1>用来形容毛发 eg 浓密的头发  浓密的睫毛 2> 用来形容森林、树丛 eg 浓密的树丛 浓密的森林     

    这里可以改成“浓糖水里”或“浓稠的糖水里”。

    3 他看起来好像在沉思想3别的东西(事情)。 沉思是不及物动词,后面不跟宾语。这句话还可以改成“他看起来好像在沉思。”       

    4  我只好顺从地服从他的命令撕掉那个袋子。  这样写感觉你很不情愿,好像被逼着做一样。                      

     你的文章特新奇,读着很有趣,而且每次你还配上图画,很形象~   多谢你每次分享这么有趣的文章~ ^ ^                                 

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    January 12, 2012
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