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My First Riding Experience
The horse was so muscular. It was the first time for me watching to see a horse so close. It had such a big rump and strong hind legs. I believed if I was get kicked by them, all of my ribs could will fracture. Of course I was not too stupid to harass the animal. irritate it, and it looked like The horse looked very tame. It had beautiful and gentle eyes, which seemed sparkling like a the lake under the moonlight. Its eyelashes are were long and thick, whose shape was like a Chinese paper fan. I had imagined many times that I was a heroine riding ride on a horse like a heroine, raising highly with my brandishing spear held high and rushing into the enemy. You could Imagine how excited I was at that exciting and exhilarating at the same time. I caught the saddle then swung myself into it. Sitting on the back of the horse, I was inflated with pride. What a feeling it would be if I can take hold of the saddle and swung myself onto it in one move. I felt I was What a great warrior that I am.a true soldier. However back into reality when the horse started to trot along the track but, I was not ready then. I heard the coach shouting out,
“Bend your waist!”
behind me. Alas! I totally fogot it. I felt myself was thrown up by the horse and dropped down fell just like a fool. How funny I must have looked was! I totally could not was unable to keep pace with the tempo of the horse’s trot. Everytime I clamped Each time my legs clasped around the horse’s belly, its nose would jet out air. To be honest, the sound scared frightened me a bit. I thought it must be not comfortable for the animal and so I refrained from doing it. , then I didn’t clamp its belly any more. What I could do The only two things are I can do is to catching hold onto the saddle firmly and bending my waist as much possible as I could. I didn’t think No more of dreams of being a heroine.of the heroine dream. So embressed I was too embarassed by then. The only matter in my head What matters in my mind was how was why this track was so long! I almost could not endure it hold on. What a lie movie scenes portray. How can someone feel comfortable on the back of a running horse! the scene playing on in action movies was completely false, how could the players feel comfortable on the back of a running horse! Then something worse happened, my glasses slipped down the bridge of my nose something that I do not need at the moment , which was like adding fuel to the fire. I had to loosen my right hand to push the glasses up. What a risky action. , but I didn't What I was thinking of it then. At last I got to reached the end destination. Thank goodness, I could not stand the any more jolts any more. I climbed off the horse like a tossed ragged doll. tired bear. My thighs were numb and I felt the ground was shaking. I and My friend and I laughed at each other's experience each other for our actions to of of the day. Though it was not ideal, lousy, I felt very happy. Haha, Really, I shall must try once more try again next time!
Riding too much will give you a bow legged look! LOL
My First Riding Experience
The horse was so muscular. It was the first time for me seeing a horse so close. It had such a big rump and strong hind legs. I believed if I was kicked by them, all of my ribs could fracture. Of course I was not too stupid to irritate it, and it looked like very tame. It had beautiful and gentle eyes, which seemed the lake under the moonlight. Its eyelash are long and thick, whose shape was like a Chinese paper fan. I had imagined many times I rode on a horse like a heroine, raising highly my spear and rushing to the enemy. You could imagine how excited I was at that time. I caught the saddle then swung myself into it. Sitting on the back of the horse, I was inflated with pride. I felt I was a true soldier. However the horse started to trot along the track, I was not ready then. I heard the coach shouting out “Bend waist!” behind me. Alas! I totally forgot it. I felt myself was thrown up by the horse and dropped down just like a fool. How funny I was! I totally could not keep pace with the tempo of the horse’s. Everytime I clamped the horse’s belly, its nose would jet out air. To be honest, the sound scared me a bit. I thought it must be not comfortable, then I didn’t clamp its belly any more. The only two things What I could do were catching the saddle firmly and bending my waist as much as I could. I didn’t think of the heroine dream. I was so embarassed then. The only matter in my head was why this track was so long! I almost could not hold on. What the scene playing on in action movies was completely false, how could the players feel comfortable on the back of a running horse! Then something worse happened, my glasses slipped down the bridge of my nose, which was like adding fuel to the fire. I had to loosen my right hand to push the glasses up. What a risky action, but I didn't think of it then. At last I got to the destination. Thank goodness, I could not stand the jolting any more. I climbed off the horse like a tired bear. My thighs were numb and I felt the ground was shaking. I and my friend laughed at each other for our actions today. Though it was lousy, I felt very happy. Haha, I shall try once more next time.
...it looked very tame, or ...it looked like it was very tame.
I had (past tense) imagined, so the past tense rode must be used.
...the tempo of the horse, or the horse's tempo.
...as much as I could, or ...as much as I possibly could.
Another great story! The first time I rode a horse I was bareback (without a saddle). My friend spurred his horse into a gallop so my horse raced to catch up. I actually slipped underneath the horse, holding on only by a rope around the horse. Eventually I fell off from underneath the horse. I'm lucky I wasn't trampled. The entire episode was exiting and it didn't stop me from getting back on a horse.
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