Could you please check my English? I met a man on a beach on the last day of a beautiful summer. ( on the last day of beautiful summer? Should I write 'A' summer? ) You took my breath away when I saw you for the first time. I had already noticed you did not belong here because of your purity, ah….amazing smile and sensual eyes which wrap my heart up You said you had come from the golden age, from another planet very far from here with the sweetest voice I had ever heard in my life. He asked me ' Are you surprised?' I answered 'Yes' but I wanted to be with him. I just surrendered to this love. Take me to Paradise you came from. Let me feel you more deeply. Tell me more, what is true love. Take me to Paradise I have dreamed. Breathe your love into me. Show me the way to fly so high You had never asked me to do anything. You just gave me your everything. You took my breath away whenever you looked into my eyes. 'There is no jealousy on the planet I live', you whispered in my ear. Ah… Don't wait to be loved, just be love, you can be love itself. You were so playful with cheeky eyes. You said 'The world is a playground for us.' You can create your own Paradise. 'Listen to your inner voice, just be yourself, Everything will be all right.' You gave me the keys to open up my heart. Let me feel you more deeply. Tell me the reason why I was born. I am not afraid of anything. Now I have wings to fly. I can fly to the Golden Age with you.

Please check if the sentences below are correct I live for love, nothing else but love, I came to life through love I was born to live for love, to give love we are all made for love I have been looking up to the sky thinking of you deeply give you sweetest words in this world, just feel me, cover you with my love songs I have learned to use magic to be happy all I need is to give love the more we give the brighter we shine our love can heal the world My love to you grows day by day give you my all, my everything no matter how much I dedicate my love, my love never stop to flow my love to you grows deeper and higher, give you my all, my everything I wanna write the best love song with you I am the light, I am love I have been looking up to the stars dreaming to see you you don't need to say any words, just feel me cover you with wordless feeling I have learned to use magic to be infinity my love to you grows beyond time and space, I wanna write the best love story with you THE END

I live for love I live for love, nothing else but love, I came to life through love I was born to live for love, to give love we are all made for love I have been looking up to the sky thinking of you deeply give you sweetest words in this world, just feel me, cover you with my love songs I have learned to use magic to be happy all I need is to give love the more we give the brighter we shine our love can heal the world My love to you grows day by day give you my all, my everything no matter how much I dedicate my love, my love never stop to flow my love to you grows deeper and higher, give you my all, my everything I wanna write the best love song with you I am the light, I am love I have been looking up to the stars dreaming to see you you don't need to say any words, just feel me cover you with wordless feeling I have learned to use magic to be infinity my love to you grows beyond time and space, I wanna write the best love story with you THE END