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let me know my mistakes please! :)
Well I am an English learner who wants to improve my writing. My level is not good. However, I wanna want to try to learn. I do not care if I make mistakes; I am going to learn with it ! Mistakes are not bad because I can learn a lot of this way.
So I gonna am going to try to translate some songs from Spanish to English. If you are interesed in helping me, Thanks so much from the bottom of my heart! :D
TORNASOL
By La Gusana Ciega
We are waiting,
your change of season
your vision of rain
your new confusion
Maybe not, I will be
who can decipher you.
Your child costume,
hides your mission
your game discovers you
storm of passion,
Maybe today, I will be
who can decipher you.
You return to be
my dreams, my sweet siren
You returns to be
the sun that burns the stars,
Sunflowers spend hours without being able to kiss you
You return to be
Suddenly the universe.
Each time they change
Color your dreams.
Look so different,
your skin is tornasol
Your reason,
is a endless fusion.
You return to
my dreams, my sweet siren
You return to
the sun that burns the stars,
Sunflowers spend hours without being able to kiss you
You returns to be
Suddenly the universe.
I do not think you know
what it feels like falling from the parasol
to intermittent sleep
From light to the bottom of your expected
where everything revolves and then slowly ...
You returns to be
my dreams, my sweet siren
You returns to be
the sun that burns the stars,
Sunflowers spend hours without being able to kiss you
You returns to be
Suddenly the universe.
Ok. This is my first translatation. Please let me know all my mistakes. I wanna learn English!! Thanks so much everyone!! :D* wanna/gonna cannot be used for writing unless it is in a qoute of someone speaking. * * * Contractions (don't, can't, etc) are used in speaking, but not in writing. * Punctuation issue. Mainly keep sententences short by adding periods where needed, and eliminated unnecessary commas.
I did my best to edit your entry to academic standards. The poem translation is flawless (except for the -s on return) as far as I can tell, since the original is not provided.
You are doing great with English. Keep going! Chao!
0 votedOctober 23, 20111How have you been guys?
well I learning English I bring 9 month ago I started learning English 9 months ago. This week I had my final quiz and I passed. Cool! However, this monday I start the next level, and cheking my books I find there are new things new for my well actually how I use the grammar I hope to understand more. me to understand about using grammar. [I think that is what you meant :P] But, most importantly, for my is can I want to be able to listen to people talk.
I am happy because I can traslate some sentences.
{(Ha egg) = some people can understand this traslate. well is spanish is:} not sure of exact meaning.*I hope I did a good job editing your entry. You have problems with word order. However, you will improve alot after studying grammar a little more.
0 votedOctober 23, 20111Making wishes
A wish is an expression of desire or inclination. I think the traditional times or places to make wishes in most countries are during New Year's Eve, at a wishing well, when seeing shooting stars or blowing out candles of a birthday cake.
Sometimes when we think about our reality, we often wish that it was different because we want to make a change. But never wish something which is completely isolated from reality. The meaning of making wishes is to perhaps allow people to have new hopes and to motivate people to work harder so that they may fullfill their wishes. Your wishes will never come true if you do not take any action to achieve them.
I like this phrase "Don't wish it were easier, wish you were better". In my opinion, it means difficulties will not be smaller if you do not try your best to improve yourself. Only if you make an effort to achieve more, difficulties might be conquered.*The only way this can be edited more is by sending it to an english professor.
0 votedOctober 23, 20111My favorite writer
I'm so happy! Today I bought a book. It's written from my favorite writer, Stephen King, It's called Cujo. In my case, I love Terror books. They are so interesting to me. What kind of reading do you prefer?
X If you want to read some really good terror, check out Clive Barker
0 votedOctober 22, 20111you and me
You will always be on my mind, but things changed, because there are things that can never go back [to the way they were]. Sometimes I really want to care about you, but something will come out stop me from doing such stupid things. I cannot break up this relationship between us
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